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Ooo, these remind me of the examples they use to show how "meaningful" a haiku can be. I especially like the second one, mostly because it has to do with ...

Reminds me of the show, "Lonely Planet" which has since been called "Globetrekkers." Basically? See the world! Yeah.. The images were interesting. I have no idea about the meaning of ...

Checking back on your old poems, eh? ;) I like the other one better. It was a lot more descriptive. This seems to be an effort for a rhyming poem, ...

I don't agree with that idea of "Oh, this is so good, therefore you must expand it!" Right now, it's good. It's short, interesting, and vivid. Why would you want ...

Interesting, but I would have to agree with Griffinkeeper. All you have to do is change some numbers - it's really no biggie. There were a couple of things that ...

I like the last stanza, but otherwise I think it's rather... um... awkward. I don't know... I think it's because I came from a chemistry class, but the first thought ...

This reminds me of Milton, not because of the content, but rather the spelling errors are so numerous, and yet I can understand them. Weird? Yes. But... yeah. 100 years ...

Oh dear! The grammar... Listen to TBR. Also, note that on each side of the semicolon, there should be a complete sentence. It's a way to use a complete sentence ...

Ha, nice surprise. ;) I would go with "raspberry red." In fact, that's how I read it at first. My only other comment is that you really need to spellcheck ...

I like the last two lines. Otherwise... um... yeah. I think the problem is you're trying too hard to rhyme, but you're forgeting about metering. Remember: metering is more important ...

AS I watch they transform into knives. Is the first word supposed to be capitalized? Other than that, very interesting. Usually I don't like anything with slashed wrists, but this ...

No! Writing about female dogs in a super confusing way is great! I've done it before with a poem called Penelope... it makes me sound like a lesbian. XD But ...

Everyone, give a big aw on the count of three. One... Two... THREE! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW... With that said, a charming poem! I love the plaid shirts line. :) Daddies are so ...

Yay! I love poetry about birds. It's just one of my favorite topics ever. :) And I love your use of colors! It's like... you tapped into two of my ...

Ooo! I do like this. It's strange, simple, yet surprisingly (even with all that French) readable. And it draws a picture. A picture of a frosty night, with blues and ...