Snoink

So! I did a video critique for you! :D I'm afraid I was too quiet, but... um... turn it up? And it's sort of long, but I rant a lot, ...

Hello lovegalore! I critiqued your poem, but once again, I did a video critique. Don't ask... they're just easier for me to do, just because most of my language is ...

Hello thevoiceinside and welcome to YWS! :D I'm Snoink and I'm a moderator, which means if you have any questions or concerns, you can always comes to me and I ...

Hello Teddybear! First of all, welcome to YWS! It's nice to see you so active and yet so new. :) Now, for your poem, I did a video critique, which ...

So! I haven't forgotten you! Because I'm lazy and don't want to write a critique, I videotaped my critique instead! So you'll be able to see my puffy, sleep-deprived eyes ...

Hello NinjaRebel! I think I've seen you around, but this is probably the first time I get to critique you, so thanks for the opportunity! Because you're awesome (and I'm ...

Ha! I am awesome and I get the first review. :) Anyway, because you're awesome (and partly because I'm too lazy to write out a proper critique) I videotaped myself ...

Okay! I did mean to critique this, but for some reason I was lazy and didn't want to type up a critique. I know, isn't that terrible? Instead, I videotaped ...

Sexy Sadie! Tangent! Etc.! Okay, so you gave me this link a long time ago, and I didn't read it, but! I read it now. So yay! :) There's a ...

You need to add a bit more conflict in her life, if you want to make a story out of this. ^^ Or maybe not in her life... but you ...

Squee! New artists to be discovered here, lol! And some oldies but goodies, like the New Pornographers and The National and Broken Social Scene...

I wish I was dead The word "was" should be "were" actually. *does grammar tweak* Also, there's no punctuation except for the last line. Is this poetic effect or you ...

I critiqued your poem on [s]youtube[/s] revver! That is, I read it out loud so you could see how it sounded like in my head. Hopefully, it'll help. :) And ...

Ooh! This is actually quite cool. :) The "M" and "E" lines weren't as good, mostly because they were jumbled around a bit a little too much. You should try ...

Questions I have! :D Why do Dooms typically find the first kill the hardest? Maybe you can have anecdotes (short stories) that the author relates to to prove this. Like, ...