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What a lovely poem! Definitely a star for you! :D Anyway, these lines was rather odd: But they get back up and run again, because the sea horses feel no ...

Don't be afraid of people interpreting your poetry as they will... this just means that you've written a complex poem which can be taken millions of different ways. I mean, ...

I'm a horrible person, but I didn't like this poem. XD Mind you, compared to the music video, it was awesome, but only because the music video sucked. :P Now: ...

Hey Leza! I remember you in chat... though you probably don't remember me because I wasn't very talkative at the time. XD Anyway, it's nice to see a story writer ...

Hey singingsaturdays! :D One of the things that struck me about this poem was the lack of story, which is a bit odd seeing as you posted this in Narrative ...

It's kind of amazing what sorts of Hollywood stories are actually non-fiction! I think it's awesome. :) These are going to be just general comments, I think, since this appears ...

Hey Kookie! First of all, the title looks quite awful! You may want to edit it so that it's in proper English. Because, really, that's the cool thing to do. ...

Hey Howler! Never seen a poem on here about a gambler... pretty cool! I think it's awesome that you chose that as a subject. :D Now, I have to agree ...

Eek, I didn't see this! Anyway, you probably know by now that I adore your poetry, so I won't go on and on how awesome that is (although you should ...

Hi Jasmine! I picked no, but that's only because I pick the worst option for anybody who puts a poll on their story or poem... no offense to you! :D ...

Hey RedSmiles! :D Now, I probably have an old school idea about poetry (since that's what I like) but I kind of like it when poets describe the metaphor fully ...

Ooh, short and sweet! I like! *stars* More particularly (since you probably want me to particularly tell you what I like) I like the direct statement that sounds like it's ...

Aww, it sounds like you got a bad review! *snugs* Well, first of all, this doesn't seem like narrative poetry at all. Narrative poetry is all about telling a story, ...

Ooh, I liked this! Reminds me of folksy music... got to love that stuff! Very lyrical. :) However... why would your guy (in the Mercedes Benz) recommend Wal-Mart to the ...

Hey, Pacific! :D I like the poem for the most part... it was quite quirky and fun! So definitely a star for you! I do wonder about the last line ...