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Awww! Dads can be soooo hard to read at times! Anyway, to the poem! I think the strength of the poem actually lies in the repetition of the questions, coupled ...

Hey jemjive! :D First of all, a couple of nitpicks! Do you know the feel?

Teehee! I love stories that are based on dreams... they're so crazy! :o Okay! So a few general comments, which hopefully will be useful! ^^ First of all! I think ...

Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnnnnnn! :o This sounds like a good writer's starter... that is, you know how you sometimes need to have motivation to write so you write something cheesy, yet ...

Awww! This is adorable. I'm sure your friend will love it. Just one thing! I may not be able to ease your aching heart Or the ability to take your ...

What a downer! I don't think you should kill Leander. I think you should revise that Greek myth... in any case, it seems to end too fast! You need to ...

Gah! Write faster, lol. The suspense is killing me! D: Part of me wants to say that you can spend more time talking about each of the preparations. For instance, ...

Woooooo! Okay, so this was the most boring chapter of them so far. :P Instead of having her think to herself, what if she thought aloud and Roxy kept interrupting ...

Hey Dante! So! This is the piece you were whining about! :P The piece is not the worst piece I've ever read. Really. I've read some awful poems. Still, when ...

One thing you might want to do is to make the first part in French and then have them be like, "Wait, what did you say?" "Oh, I'm sorry, I ...

Awww, this is a sad poem. And really, you do matter, more than you'd ever realize! Why? Because all our lives seem to touch together in a strange way and ...

Aw, people would care! I think you would be surprised at how many people love you. :) And eek! I recently got a poem kind of like this from my ...

Hey kitro! :D One thing I think you can do is to talk about what pain... or at least give us a hint of what sort of pain you are ...

Hey Mary! The repetition makes this rather humorous! I'm not sure if that's meant to be the case or not, but it made me giggle a bit. There's just one ...

Okay! This is going to be a quick nit-picky thing, but this is set in the future, and quite honestly, e-mail is not going to be the means of communication ...