Snazzy

Hi! Seriously, like Taha already mentioned, this totally doesn't stink. ;) If you think this is childish, you should read some of my poems! xD (I literally have one called ...

Hello! :D Aww, cut yourself some slack. ;) This isn't really that bad, and I think the repetitiveness of the entire thing makes it all the more better. :D Anyway, ...

Hello Fantasy! I absolutely love this.

Hi! I like the idea of this story, but the punctuation and grammar issues made it a little hard to read... But no worries! :D That's what reviews are for! ...

Hi BookWolf! First off, I have to say that this is well written. The relationship between Gwendolen and Bellona is really believable, and your descriptions, though a bit overdone at ...

Hi I am a horrible not-on-time reviewer Really though, I am SO sorry for the delay on reviews. I'm hoping to be churning out a lot more in this new ...

Hi! This is a wonderful story you have here... Haunting and action-packed - I like it. ;) Anyway, time for the review... It has invaded your mind, pulses through your ...

Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your poem! I have to start out, with this is pretty stinkin' good. ;) The ending was unexpected, and well, funny! Good job with ...

Hi Falconer! but if you hate megan you must hate ohio Sorry - I'm hungry and in a "ranting mood". Anyway, this is a pretty good chapter! You definitely sparked ...

Hello Falc! Finally getting back into the reviewing spirit, after about 3 days of no reviewing at ALL. :D This is a good chapter! You start it out nice, and ...

Hello jessiebear! This is good! My favorite line would probably have to be "in his white scaly chest". For some reason, I can always feel/see Frost in that sentence. :) ...

Hi felistia! Terribly sorry this is late. Exams are over though, and I'm on Christmas break, so I should be able to get all my needed reviews in before Christmas! ...

Hi! :D I admit I clicked on this because of the title... Way to draw the hungry reviewers in! ;) Seriously though, a title is the first thing I look ...

Hi felistia! I agree with LadyBug, this is the darkest one yet! :D It might possibly be my favorite, although the other parts were awesome too. ;) Anyway, time for ...

Hi Mad/Writer/MadWriter! :D This is a nice chapter, and I really like that last sentence! You make it realistic, yet I still suspenseful throughout the entire thing - giving it ...