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Hi Falconer! Fantastic chapter you have here! I couldn't find much wrong with the way you presented your characters, and overall, this was pretty good! Anyway, time for the review- ...

Hi Falconer! This is a very good chapter - I didn't find much to correct in this! (Although there are plenty of other reviewers that are better at this than ...

Hi Falc! Megan is all grown up now... ;-; okay, so she's YOUR Megan, but still. xP Overall, this is really good! I love that she has new friends - ...

Hi! This is an amazing idea. Your description is awesome. At first I thought it was going to be too much - but when you started "doing things" rather than ...

Greetings! After reading The Sword , I had to check out your other poems. >.< I was NOT disappointed!! The repetition of "There is silence Silence apart" is probably what ...

Hello! I actually really like the idea of your poem! I agree this could've been a little longer. You have so much going for it in these lines - Embedded ...

Hello! Snazzy here, to review you overall pretty good story! :D Let me just say first, your characters are pretty well-thought out for the most part! Good job with that! ...

Hello! I've decided to just review the ones in the green room first, and THEN get back to reviewing in order. It's just taking me too long right now. ;) ...

Hello! This is a fairly nice piece! I often think that pieces about love are often repetitive, and overused so much that it gets boring - but you put a ...

Hello! I must say, over all I am kind of confused with the entire message this poem is trying to convey... Although your last lines really were powerful! Way to ...

Hello! Here comes Isabelle, here comes Isabelle, right down friendship lane! :D I was wondering when Isabelle would come into play. :D Anyway, time for the (rather short) review! “You’ve ...

Hi MadWriter! This is a pretty good chapter, actually! For the most part, your character's are all developed well, and they are very diverse - so that's good. ;) Anyway, ...

Hello! As I have said before, I am quite backed up on reviews. I have two novels I'm trying to juggle, along with another author whom I promised to look ...

Hi Falconer! Once again, another nice chapter! It is a little short, true, but the content is great! Anyway, time for the review! As she turned away from her home ...

Hi! I like the idea of your novel, and although your characters aren't unique, I feel like the story line is pretty good - as long as you continue to ...