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Yo. ;) I like that Isabelle's always there for Meg. >.< Such a good friend. ;) So my this review is basically a whole lot of nitpicking and of nothing ...

Howdy! So this is a nice chapter - at least it somewhat resolves the conflict between Ash and Meg. You always have a powerful last sentence, which is really good. ...

Dia dhuit! (Hello!) First off, I must say this is a nice idea for a poem - and that's where all good poems start from: a good idea. But there ...

Hello! Although many authors, as well as myself, are catching onto the idea of building up, building up more, and then letting go, I still think you did a pretty ...

Hola! Although this doesn't have a lot of action in it, it's actually not a bad chapter. I like how Emily and Isabelle kind of 'hit it off', and the ...

Hellllloooo! (-and welcome to YWS!) This is a very nice story! Your concluding sentence left a huge impact on me, and other readers as well, I'm sure. Anyway, on to ...

Hi! This is a nice chapter. Short and sweet - I like them like that. ;) So the review's going to be the same... :D The boy groaned but refused ...

Hello! Overall, your chapter is very good! There are just a few little nitpicks/house-keeping type things I wanted to mention. First off, I think that you should post chapters in ...

Hi lawrence! So I’ve actually written this in a word document over about a day or so… So if the formatting or something seems off, it’s because I’ve never written ...

Hello! My sister would really love the idea of this - these types of books are her favorite! Anyway, time for the review! Mama huddled all six of us in ...

Hi! You have some strong lines in this poem - the last two were my absolute favorites. Anyway, time for the review! Because you never know when it is here ...

Hello! This review is going to be short, because as the other reviewers stated, this is absolutely amazing! Ieva's last line really left a mark, and it was a great ...

Hello! This poem is quite good - the repetition of "She was okay with that" and "I'm okay with that" really brought the entire thing together. Now, time for the ...

Hi Falconer! I must say, I like the little bits of humor in this. The relationship between Meg's dad and Thomas seems really believable, and quite funny. :D The little ...

Hi Falconer! Another great chapter! Your endings are always so wonderful.