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Re: Failure
Hello. Smuggg here to review your work :) I really like the idea of this poem. It seems to me that you are trying to recollect a memory of some ...
Feb 28, 2019 -
Re: Circle one
Hello (: Smuggg here to review your work :) First, I would like to say that I love the layout of this work. Its very unique and catching to the ...
Feb 28, 2019 -
Re: Shiver
Helllllloooo :) Here to review your piece here. I want to start off by saying that I love that this flowed out of your mind and onto a piece of ...
Feb 12, 2019 -
Re: Eyes that should never be Seen
Hellllo, Smuggg here :) I just want to write a short review here. I want to start by saying that I think this is a very well written lyrical poem, ...
Feb 6, 2019 -
Re: hush
This is, hands down, one of the most emotionally intense poems I have read in a while. I love the words, and the aggressive expression. It flows extremely well and ...
Feb 5, 2019 -
Re: dangerous ideas
Hello, :) I would like to start by saying that I think the content and use of words in this poem are really good. I like the way it flows, ...
Feb 5, 2019 -
Re: Elizabeth (#1)
wow This truly gave me goose bumps. The way the poem is organized and written is just beautifully put together and flows with the eyes. The conversation style is extremely ...
Feb 3, 2019 -
Re: Unfocused.
wow. I am completely, and utterly shocked. This is beautiful. Lyrically, it flows. Image wise, its descriptive as hell. Its beautifully written and very engaging emotionally. I feel like you ...
Jan 31, 2019 -
Re: Lady of the Lake
helllloooooo :) Let me start off by saying i love the mood of this piece. I, too, enjoy dark writing, with a sort of dark, and possibly sad, depressing meaning. ...
Jan 31, 2019 -
Re: Opps, I Added too much Pepper
This was cute and clever. I definitely think that you need to work a tad bit on your imagery. You have a solid base for a good, funny poem but ...
Jan 31, 2019 -
Re: Mother's Judgement
This is AMAZING. The references i got right off the bat, i mean i am a huge nerd so they were easy for me to find but i absolutely LOVED ...
Jan 31, 2019
