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Hello their! :) Blaze here to give you an awesome review! So lets start with the downs first then we can go to the ups!! :3 So first towards the ...

Hey Chibi!! how are you, any way I am here to review your work, sorry I read the first chapter but did not review it, so I decided to make ...

OOOOOOO I LOVED IT!!! and I really like how you began it! rule one, rule two rule three omg it was awesome!! I am pretty impressed with your work! I ...

That was awesome!! Pulse I love and I mean love the title. Hi my name is @BlueBlaze and I am here to review your work :) so the start was ...

hello banana. okay so I am going to pute your negative stuff on the top right here then on the bottom will be like what I really liked about it, ...

This has to be one of my favorite chapters I love it so much, but the beginning is just a bit confusing but that is ok, any way wen Jason ...

WOW!!!!!!!!! this chapter is my FAVORITE!!!!!!! there is so much character development! but the end is so sad! but that is just fin, I am so exited to no what ...

This is a pretty good chapter and I like how we get to see more of Kaylee and Caleb in this one but there are a few unnecessary parts, and ...

ok so this has to be one of my FAVPRITE chapters by u, it is really good! the beginning was just a bite scratchy but it was still awesome! I ...

hello @SmougsIntern :) this was a vary good chapter! I love it!!! the beginning was really good in this chapter but the end could use a cliff hanger, but all ...

it was pretty good! my fav character is probably either Jason or Kaylee no Madison or Jason yes :) but Ethan is pretty cool, and Caleb is so stupid it ...