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Re: In The Heart of The Head
This poem is very warm, I get the idea of sitting next to a fire having it told to me. I love the rhyme scheme, it really works well with ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Love is
Great! So I, as a fully fledged cynic, probably shouldn't like this. Right? Wrong. It was startlingly real, lovely and believable and just made me want to read more. Keep ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: A List
Great :) I really like the simplistic style to it and the flow of it seemed to fit. Maybe to just add a bit more effect to the last line, ...
Nov 14, 2011 -
Re: Halloween
I loved it- It made me chuckle :) Okay, so I'm English- Are Jack 'O' Lanterns Pumpkins? Sorry- Should probably know that :)
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: The Impossible
Hey, I really like this. It wasn't just well described but really well thought out. I loved the line Invisible to the naked eye he things people say aren't true ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: War
Whoa. This is amazing. I am not about to spout a long word to tell you that so good day and Keep writing :) Also? What credit did you get ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm so Proud of You - Chapter One
Wow. One word. Okay now I have 3 = Mind is blown. You have a real talent for getting across human emotions in a way that's natural and heat warming. ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mr. President
I liked it. Different, real and creative. I loved the fact you kept the same language throughout the whole thing and what really made me chuckle was the whole scenario ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: That's So Edward
Hahahah, Oh that made me chuckle :) The perfect antidote to a cynical view on twilight. Hahaha. That will actually keep me laughing for a while now... :P
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Lavender Way
Great. I loved the way it the suspense flowed throughout the entire thing an wasn't jerky. The detail was brilliant and I loved 'Her mind was buzzing in a cloudy ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Call me Alice: Part One
Real. That is the one word I would use to describe this. It's refreshingly honest,truthful and Normal. Something everyone can relate to because after all 'Everyone has a crush right? ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Short Action Scene
Wow. Where to start? I understand that it's meant to be short, snappy and full on but I can't help thinking that you could really develop this. Maybe he's not ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Dead Space - Security (Chapter One and Two)
I liked it. That's the short of it. Not normally my thing but I could be persuaded to go out now and my some Zombie book. Then again,I'd much rather ...
Oct 29, 2011