Sleeplessend

Im just going to assume this was inspired by Korn. :)

Thank you I kinda did that intentionally to try something new and see what my peers would think obviously it wasn't very smart :p. thank you for the review nonetheless ...

Thank you :)

Merci! :)

Thank you for the review im glad you enjoyed it. :)

Thank you im glad you liked it :)

Thank you for the review :)

Thank you for the review i will definitely work on it.

Thank you for the review im sorry i mad eyou cry by the way. :/

Thank you for the review :)

Thank you for the review :)

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I posted a continuation if the chapter it's a more in depth description of the transformation. Enjoy :)

Thank you so much for the review :) I get what you mean by too much action when I thought of the story that's basically what I wanted too many ...

It's quite alright. This was actually a poem written about a zombie in spirit of Halloween hehe :). Hence in the part 1 the ending line is "even though it ...