SkyeDreamer

This was FUN! Haha, I laughed a lot. Kinda true, though. The positive parts (friends, etc) and negative (WRITERS BLOCK!!!) :) Good!!

This was funny! I do wish you had rhymed more; it could have turned this from amusing to hilarious. As other reviews have pointed out, it needed a little editing. ...

Just a hint, be careful because at the start you miss spaces, and i'm not sure if it's there for affect, but it just annoyed me. Check over your spelling ...

You took a cliche topic and made it sound good. It reminds me a little but of "Long Gone" by Lady Antebellum, but your song is still unique. I enjoyed ...

This was very good. I think you should have rated it as 16+ or at least 12+, but that's just me. I liked it, though.

This was really good. I'm sure many people could relate to it. I liked the imagery, too!

This message is good, but I didn't really like it as a poem. Someone else said that already, so I won't go into it. But it was definitely a good ...

It is very confusing at times, as other comments were saying, but it's good. I like the comparisons you use, even though I don't understand all of them. It needs ...

Actually, the simple style is really pretty and sweet. It does sort of portray innocence, and the poem is very sweet. I really liked it. Any "mistakes" have already been ...

It's really good but pretty dark. I liked the image and feeling the poem portrayed... good job. I agree with Tamara; I couldn't really find anything wrong here.

This is cute! It maybe could have flowed a little better, but my favorite teacher just came back from maternity leave and this reminded me of her, so... I enjoyed ...