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Hey @TheDepressedCat! Ok, I'll start by saying that this is an awesome start! I was really intrigued by it, and I will definitely read the next part! So, about the ...

This is an AWESOME story Honora! I love the characters, and your writing style seems really life-like but not too casual! So, the only thing that I'd really say is ...

Hey Dreamworx95! (I'm sort of new to YWS, so I don't write very long reviews.) I’ll just start by congratulating you on an A-W-E-S-O-M-E chapter! I actually didn’t see that ...

Hi Anma! This is a great start! It's super exciting and i can't wait to find out what happens next :). I just have some small suggestions - you might ...

Hi starchaser! This is a great piece - very emotional and just overall, I love it! I just had one little suggestion - the spacing adds to the effect, but ...

Hi Joe! This is great! I just have a few suggestions that i hope will help! I think that in the first line, you might want to change it to ...

Hi Terian! This is an awesome poem! The story is really creative and the rhyming is great! I just had ONE suggestion for you, and it's pretty small. You said ...

Hey Munozutoo2122! I love the wording, and I think this story could go really far! I just had three suggestions for you - the first is to maybe go back ...

Hi Panikos! Okay, I'll start by saying that I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! There's not much that I have to add and I always really want to see where ...

Hi Luna! I just want to start by saying that this is a really great piece, and I think that it could go really really far! 🤩The first suggestion that ...

Hey Riley! Hope you're having a great afternoon! I love the idea behind your poem - it's super awesome! I don't know much about poetry, but I had a suggestion, ...