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Re: A Heroin Laced Love Story(Adult Content)
Hi Prince, Tobes with your requested review! First of all, pros! Everyone loves them! Grammar and spelling. Your grammar and spelling was excellent, there was no real flaws, except the ...
Jun 10, 2012 -
Re: Oldies all I got
Thanks for the review! The 'oldies' is pretty straight forward. It means old people. In verse 2, there's a reference too teenagers 'dults (adults) and oldies. It pretty much says ...
Jun 9, 2012 -
Re: Shimmer and Shake
Ooooh, creepy. I like this, I really do. Emotion: * * * * * The emotion in this one is terrifying (in a good way), it is very well described, ...
May 13, 2012 -
Re: zombies
You seem about...8. And that wasn't a hyperbole. I have a headache after reading that. There was a ton of punctuation and spelling errors, and you had no detail. Work ...
Mar 13, 2012 -
Re: zombies
How old are you?
Mar 13, 2012 -
Re: Annoying Qualities of Boys
Awesome Master! Totally agree!
Mar 12, 2012 -
Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)
Thnkas,I fixed that up. I'll post chapter 1 later today maybe.
Feb 28, 2012 -
Re: haven't decided on title yet. Chap 1
No one likes your story.
Feb 19, 2012 -
Re: Pics
Thanks.
Feb 17, 2012 -
Re: What it is Like
Hi, Toby here with your review today. Overall I think it's a great idea and you did a good job portraying it. The good things were the excellent discriptive language ...
Feb 17, 2012 -
Re: Funny Party
Humour?
Feb 16, 2012 -
Re: Funniest survey
I wrote it
Feb 12, 2012 -
Re: The facebook Clean out steps (joke) (DO NOT DO!)
Not writing, stupidity maybe
Feb 8, 2012 -
Re: The Silence
Thank you, I've read a bit if your stuff. It's good writing, but not the genre I like, not your fault, if course, it just took me a while to ...
Feb 7, 2012 -
Re: The Silence
The pitch wasn't that, but I guess it could be. I hope you like the rest...
Feb 6, 2012