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Funny Party

by Nightgoddess


We're gonna
We're gonna

We're gonna par-ar-arty
,till we can't anymore

we're gonna dance
until the sun
comes up

AGAIN!
AGAIN!

Lets go go go 

Time to lose control

Let your hair fall down 

Let your feet 
lead your heart

And there's a clown
on the dance floor

And my elephants in 
the pool

Fish him out before
my dad gets back

Or I won't be alive for school!

We're gonna 
         par-ar-arty

Until we can't anymore

We're gonna dance
  until the sun comes
        up

AGAIN!
AGAIN!


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Wed Feb 22, 2012 11:01 am
Blift says...



Sorry I don't like it. It just sounds like those party songs you here in dance clubs, especially the lines about the sun coming up. also, it's not very humorous, just because you add the line about Clowns on the dancefloor, doesn't mean that it will make anyone laugh.




Nightgoddess says...


well sorry >:(



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SirTobes says...



Humour?




Nightgoddess says...


I said it was funny.




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