Sionarama

I LOVED this!!!! No complaints. At all. Great rhyming and words. Think you could do one on Palin? ~Sionarama p.s. if anyone knows Mcain's email, send it to him!!

Thanks Elinor!! I appreciate it. The oonly problem is that I don't have a friend who use to like their allergy. Do you have any allergies?? Sionarama

Okay peoples sorry for all of the confusions!! If I could, I'd delete it :(! Yes, I understand it is bland and dull, too fast or too slow. I was ...

Yah I'm TOTALLY interested!!!! Lee-Anna, thanks for finally reviewing!! it's about time (hahahaha)! I'll be sure to try and change it....

Awwwwww thanks lala!!! This was a writing piece for my writng class. She gave you a picture and you had to make a story out of it. No one else ...

Dear Elinor, Thanks a million!! I'm having trouble fixing it because it was one of my first poems. This is a metaphorical flower about the evolution of human emotions. And ...

I wrote this when I was 8 so its not one of my longest poems (duh!). But I was really suprised when I saw the reviews. I think its a ...

Valentine, Sorry for reviewing again! I just read a magazine specifically talking about mystery stories. Here are some pointers: 1) make up abreviations. Like maybe a KBK (killed by knife). ...

Violet eyes are NOT impossible!!!!! They are just not common! Humph! i will not give up hope, Sionarama

Oh, Lee-Anna! You know me so well! This is why we are BFFLs. I write and you correct even though you write, I can never find any thing wrong! I ...

Navita, This essay was turned in by me for my writing class called Institute of Excellence in Writing or usually known as I.E.W. This was a comparative essay comparing Greek ...

Great story! This is a gross story so if that's what you're looking for, you'll definately get an A. You just need some touch ups on grammmar and paragraph breaks. ...

This is a great story! Some of the sentences are run-ons, so you should change them... There is too much dialouge, but its a good writing form.

Hi i'm sionarama! I liked your story. It was heartwarming and sad though cussing is a big prob. also spacing is. Keep up the good work.

Prologue He didn’t look anything like she expected. great begining! Here standing in front of her was the complete opposite. same with this line! He was at least 6 spell ...