Siobhanoshea

Thank you! The 'it' is sort of supposed to be confusing, because the whole safe place idea is protected from outside. And nothing outside could ever get in. Something inside ...

Thank you for spending so much of your time trying to help me! I know I have a lot of work to do with this. It was written while I ...

Thank you! I was writing about some really mixed up emotions and experiences, and wrote it during what you could call a complete nervous breakdown. It's been tough trying to ...

Thank you, this is helpful. I agree some of the lines had weird wording, I tried to keep with a syllable pattern of 10 7 7. A bit arbitrary, but ...

Wow. This is absolutely beautiful. And it makes me sad to read, sad for her. I don't quite know what I am sad about. But I think that makes it ...

Thank you. Really. I tried so hard to capture those crazy feelings, and it's wonderful to think maybe I did.

Thank you so much :)

Thank you so much! I do need to type more carefully, thank you for pointing that out, I didn't even notice either of those. -Siobhan

I think this is quite beautiful, actually. Kudos to you! My only criticism would be the last line. The forever seemed a bit anti-climactic. Forever is a word used far ...