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Thanks for the reviews guys, I really appreciate it :) As for the comment about the dead people in the cemetery, it would have made a lot more sense to ...

Wow... I completely forgot about this! It's almost a year old now! Jesus... I've improved since then! :lol: It shows what this site does to your skills. Reading this is ...

Thanks for the reviews guys :) Thanks for that comma link thing! I suck so badly when it comes to commas... They deeply confuse me... :| Knightley: As for the ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I really appreciate them. I agree with you Dreamy. I thought that this was a big jump from the first chapter. The problem is though, ...

Ha... you see, there's a difference. Chavs = Fake burberry Normal people = Real burberry :D

Thanks for the reviews guys :) I've noticed that I have an issue with commas. I always have, it's really annoying! Practice makes perfect I suppose! The MC's a boy ...

Hey x I quite enjoyed this XD I agree with the other comment that the story is rather confusing, maybe it's the first night of her job as a hooker? ...

Thanks for the reviews guys, they really help! I've tried to polish it up a bit and hopefully it's a little better! Once again thanks for the reviews. Your friend, ...

Oh! And sorry it's a bit long :?

lol! I put pervy price because there is actually a teacher in my school who we call that! That's who I based pervy parker on! :lol:

Thanks! I guess I'll see you later! Meg xoxo

Thanks for the reviews guys! I've improved it a little and your reviews really help! A lorry is a truck/van by the way! I've changed that to truck so it ...

I loved this! It was really good and I loved it. It was so dramatic and it really made me think about all of what you were saying. I'm not ...

Thanks for the comments guys! Keep them coming ^_^ It's just a random poem I got inspired to do! Meg x-x

Thanks for the comments guys! It's not really supposed to make sense because it's a random part of the story!