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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I have Four Scars

    I adored this! It was emotional, original and extremely well written! I especially love the theme of this poem, it really does make a person think. I have to agree ...

    May 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Haiku- twilight(Nothing to do with the book)

    I really liked this! Like Mars said, Haiku's are hard poems to do! I quite like the theme of the poem as well :) I especially like the second line ...

    May 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Don't Know What Love Is

    Wow, I love this! It's really good! It's great because it's all true as well, how adults are hypocritical about love when they say that we're children and that we ...

    May 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I'm so, so sorry

    I really liked this! I agree with Juciebox that I love the way you start the poem ith a flashback, it's really clever! You get to know the MC in ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: .

    I think that this is really good! Like I've said to many people before, I'm a rubbish critique so I'm going to write a nkce review! I really like the ...

    May 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Black

    I actually really liked this! I am a really awful critique so think of this as you compliment review! Like loads of people before me have said, I love your ...

    May 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tree of deceit

    Hey x I really like this! People have already basicly said what I'm about to say but I'll repeat it anyway becasue I feel like I need to! I absolutely ...

    May 18, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Can I brake?

    Hey x I really did love this! It wasn't majourly long and boring so it suited me well! I agree with Time8Keeper that my favourite three lines of the poem ...

    May 18, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Stuck in the Past: Part Three (Edited)

    I really liked this! I'm not a very good critique so I wouldn't take my review to seriously! But even though that is true I will try to do the ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: C'est La Vie

    I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what was happening. I'm not a ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What he doesn't know

    I really liked this! It was really interesting and I realluy did love it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: deleated

    I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unnatural

    I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Elegy of a Dead Man

    I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Notes on a Plane Crash

    I really liked this! It was rather depressing, obviously, but I still loved it. It was dramatic and it really made me think about what you were saying. I'm not ...

    May 8, 2009


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