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I agree with Stori. Wow. :lol: Your writing skills are amazing! If I could write like you, I'd be dancing around my house! Seriously though, I can't really find any ...

Hey there :) There are plenty of good books around! One of my favourite authors is Malorie Blackman. She's written loads of great books. Some of my favourite books of ...

Hey there Treehugger :) I have to agree with David. I really loved your poem! I also agree with the fact that it felt like I was reading a story, ...

Hey there :) I really did enjoy reading your poem! You portray various emotions very well, and put loads of vivid, interesting pictures into my head. Your lines seemed to ...

Hey there Forestqueen :) You're in the same storybook as me aren't you? 8) I must say, I did enjoy reading your poem. Although, it was a bit on the ...

Hey there David :) I have to say, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I love your use of imaginary, it was really effective. Well done for that. :wink: Although, ...

Hey there samiam :) I've noticed that you haven't done any reviews so far. I don't want to sound like a miserable saddo or anything, but it's a nice idea ...

Hey there :) I thought that your poem was pretty good! It was original, which is a very good thing and you portrayed some very good emotion in your writing. ...

Hey there :) I thought that this chapter was great. It's made me want to read the other twelve now! Well done for doing that. :wink: The other reviewers have ...

Hey there! :) I have to admit, I loved your poem! I agree with your comment on the start. You have clearly put a lot of effort into this. Well ...

Hey there :) I enjoyed reading your poem! It wasn't incredible, but I definitely think that you have potential. I agree with Elinor when she said that the voice in ...

Hey there fiction! :) I really liked your story! Your writing was putting images into my head, which is an extremely good thing to be able to do. I agree ...

Hey there Kylan! :) I have to say, I adored this poem! To be perfectly honest, I can't really find any negative points to say about it. Like others have ...

Hey there TenYo! :) Like the other reviewers have said, I really liked your poem! Agreeing with Kinghtley, I am so glad to be reading a positive poem for once. ...

Hey there Kineta! Welcome to YWS! :) Before I get on to the review, I want to remind you to make sure that you do some reviews as well! I ...