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  • Novel / Chapter » General, Historical Fiction Re: Untitled, Chapter Two

    How dare you post the second chapter of this without telling me *tuts* I'm worried this will make me sound like a patronising mother, but I'd suggest conjuring up a ...

    Apr 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 11

    Heya! She points even more insistently, pushing Hilda away. “The best way for you two to truly make nice is to stay together. Go with your future partner. Chop, chop!” ...

    Apr 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Historical Fiction Re: Untitled, Chapter One

    ohhidere. I'm actually getting to this way earlier than I thought I would because I'm currently experiencing the biggest procrastination session known to humanity. But yay, earliness! I'm super pumped

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 6, The Name Game

    Hey there, me again! So this was an interesting read. There wasn't anything dramatic happening, but you kept me pretty engaged throughout the extract, so that certainly can't be a ...

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Finally, I hath arrived! Granted, I thought I was a month late as opposed to a week, but that confusion in itself clearly states the extent of my uselessness. What ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 5, The Name Game

    Hey there, finally, I'm here! Hm, I really enjoyed this part, not sure I'll have much to say. Firstly, I want to praise you on the character dynamics of Rowan ...

    Apr 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 6.2

    Why, hello there. Oooooo, stuff. I did have some concerns in previous chapters regarding things moving a bit slowly at times, but they're really starting to get into gear now, ...

    Apr 16, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Memoir and Chapter 1

    Heyhey! :) So I really love that we're seeing Hilda's life before becoming a Scion now, compared to before where we only got a tiny glimpse. This kind of thing ...

    Apr 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part II)

    Me again :P I should be doing uni work right now, but procrastination is one of my greatest talents, so here I am! There isn't heaps of development in this ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Starlight: Chapter 1 (Part I)

    Hey there, here to review per request! I feel like this is going to be a rather short review because the piece itself is rather short, and there isn't heaps ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 10

    Here I am, at last! I won't ramble, so let's get straight into things :) Things are turning a little dark now, I like it! I was suspicious of the ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 4, The Name Game

    hihi! I'm here to review per request, and will hopefully get to the next two parts soonish, I am away this weekend, though, so apologies if it doesn't end up ...

    Apr 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Post-perpetual - IV

    hidere. I was going to review this last night for review day, but then I got lazy and started eating all my Easter chocolate and fell into a sugar coma. ...

    Apr 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 6.1

    It would've been sensible of me to review this on review day, really, but apparently I'm not sensible. "So, you want answers?" I looked at him inquisitively. Now was his ...

    Apr 4, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Fate of the Stone Makers [Part 1]

    ohhithere. I'm disappearing for a week tomorrow, so wanted to get to this now to avoid making you wait ages. Either that, or my cheese brain would end up forgetting ...

    Mar 26, 2016


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— Terry Pratchett