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Yo yo yo, Stella, mah main man! (by which I mean woman, I am aware that you don't have, like, a penis or anything.) Also, I'm so sorry this is, ...

Yo. Stellatron. Well as you've reviewed loads of my stuff lately, I feel really bad because I haven't reviewed anything of yours. Sooooooo, here I am to review this! I ...

You did not inform me that you had posted this next chapter! GASP. But yay, I'm glad I found this! This is, like, a totally awesome chapter too because there's ...

iya sxc. You've got loads of epic, awesome, mind-blowingly cool reviews already, so I'm probably going to be about as useful as a goldfish trying to burp the alphabet... But ...

Hey Xreigon, you only received one of your Secret Santa reviews during Christmas in July, and so I'm here to give you that second review! :) To my surprise, I ...

Hey there indie, you only received one review form your Secret Santa during Christmas in July, and so I'm here to give you your second review! I'm going to warn ...

Hey there! As you only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July, I'm here to give you your second review. :) So you've already got some ...

Hey Shadow, as your Secret Santa only reviewed one of your works during Christmas in July, I'm here to give you your second one! I'll begin by saying that I ...

Hey Olive. :) As you only received one review from your Secret Santa during Christmas in July, I am here to save the day! Well, okay, maybe not save the ...

Hey TwinkleStar! You only had one review during Christmas in July from your Secret Santa, so I'm here to give you your second one. :) You don't seem to have ...

'Sup. I was planning on getting to this, like, straight away, but I've had a pretty hectic week. I've been looking forward to reading this though, so I'm really glad ...

Hey darkangel, here to review as requested! Now I honestly have no idea if I'll be of any use here because poetry really isn't my thing, but I'll try my ...

iya sxc, me again I'm fairly sure this review will be more lame than the last one because not that much happens in this, plus I think it's a really ...

Twit, u twit. Hi. You've got some awesomesauce reviews already so I've no idea if I'll actually be of any use... but I shall try my best as you are ...

Noelleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Hi. So I think this is another great chapter overall. The general quality of your writing is very good, I must say, and nothing stood out to me in ...