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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth-Chapter five;The ultimate staring contest.

    Heya, sorry for taking a little longer to get to this than usual! So this is progressing really well, yay! I am so insanely glad that you didn't fall into ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter four; The chosen one

    OH MY GOD, THE HEADMASTER IS A KICK-ASS OLD CHINESE GUY, YAAAAS. So hi. Things really are getting exciting now, and I am seriously looking forward to finding out what ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth, Chapter three; Who on earth am I?

    Hey writer, I didn't realise you'd posted the third chapter! I only noticed when I saw the fourth one lurking in the forums. So things are getting pretty exciting! I ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: DRAFT - Please leave feedback!

    Hey there smiler20, and welcome to YWS :D If you haven't already, go and introduce yourself in the [url= Mat[/url] forum! Reviews and feedback are a big deal on this ...

    Jan 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]

    Hey there Lightsong, I'm here per request! So I really liked this. I adore the whole fairytale vibe you've got going on, and the cliffhanger you have at the end ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Firegirl (1)

    Elinor! :P I saw this pop up on the homepage and I've got so much revision to do that exam failure is inevitable, so naturally I figured I'd come and ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter two; The weird dream

    It's me again! :P So I love this whole fantasy vibe you've got going on, and the idea of a mystical forest leading to another world is really cool. Plot-wise, ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Post-perpetual

    Yo, 'sup. Just a pre-warning, even before my hiatus (one of many, I'm awful, I know) my reviews were extremely disorganised and occasionally non-sensical, so I worry this may be ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Glass & Ashes

    Hey there Holysocks, I'm here per request! I've recently made a comeback to YWS, so I'm just going to pre-warn you that this review may be a tad sketchy/lack any ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter one; Worst day ever.

    'Sup! Just a heads up, this here chapter is the first thing I've reviewed since the dark ages (aka about 18 months), so I apologise in advance if it's a ...

    Jan 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Foxglove: Chapter Five

    I'm baaaack! Ooooo so this is turning into something very interesting! I can't think of a story I've read that's similar to this, which is a brilliant thing because it ...

    Oct 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Foxglove: Chapter Four

    Me again! :3 So this chapter answered my question of who looked after Foxglove when she was a child, so yay for that. This was a good chapter overall actually, ...

    Oct 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Foxglove: Chapter Three

    Hey jazzy! I saw you post the third and fourth chapter for this in the Will Review For Food Forum when I was lurking said forum earlier, so I figured ...

    Oct 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Desert Rose - 1

    Stellaaaaaaaaaaaaa hi. I got really excited when I saw you'd posted something, especially when I noticed it was an opening chapter because novels are my faves. Anyway, I really enjoyed ...

    Oct 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 3.2 [SCRAPPED]

    So, chapter 3.2! This was a good follow-up to chapter 3.1, so kudos to you for that. I really loved the concept of someone (the youth) being addicted to magic, ...

    Oct 12, 2014


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