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Re: The Myth-Chapter five;The ultimate staring contest.
Heya, sorry for taking a little longer to get to this than usual! So this is progressing really well, yay! I am so insanely glad that you didn't fall into ...
Jan 26, 2016 -
Re: The Myth- Chapter four; The chosen one
OH MY GOD, THE HEADMASTER IS A KICK-ASS OLD CHINESE GUY, YAAAAS. So hi. Things really are getting exciting now, and I am seriously looking forward to finding out what ...
Jan 20, 2016 -
Re: The Myth, Chapter three; Who on earth am I?
Hey writer, I didn't realise you'd posted the third chapter! I only noticed when I saw the fourth one lurking in the forums. So things are getting pretty exciting! I ...
Jan 20, 2016 -
Re: DRAFT - Please leave feedback!
Hey there smiler20, and welcome to YWS :D If you haven't already, go and introduce yourself in the [url= Mat[/url] forum! Reviews and feedback are a big deal on this ...
Jan 20, 2016 -
Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]
Hey there Lightsong, I'm here per request! So I really liked this. I adore the whole fairytale vibe you've got going on, and the cliffhanger you have at the end ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Firegirl (1)
Elinor! :P I saw this pop up on the homepage and I've got so much revision to do that exam failure is inevitable, so naturally I figured I'd come and ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: The Myth- Chapter two; The weird dream
It's me again! :P So I love this whole fantasy vibe you've got going on, and the idea of a mystical forest leading to another world is really cool. Plot-wise, ...
Jan 18, 2016 -
Re: Post-perpetual
Yo, 'sup. Just a pre-warning, even before my hiatus (one of many, I'm awful, I know) my reviews were extremely disorganised and occasionally non-sensical, so I worry this may be ...
Jan 17, 2016 -
Re: Glass & Ashes
Hey there Holysocks, I'm here per request! I've recently made a comeback to YWS, so I'm just going to pre-warn you that this review may be a tad sketchy/lack any ...
Jan 17, 2016 -
Re: The Myth- Chapter one; Worst day ever.
'Sup! Just a heads up, this here chapter is the first thing I've reviewed since the dark ages (aka about 18 months), so I apologise in advance if it's a ...
Jan 17, 2016 -
Re: Foxglove: Chapter Five
I'm baaaack! Ooooo so this is turning into something very interesting! I can't think of a story I've read that's similar to this, which is a brilliant thing because it ...
Oct 15, 2014 -
Re: Foxglove: Chapter Four
Me again! :3 So this chapter answered my question of who looked after Foxglove when she was a child, so yay for that. This was a good chapter overall actually, ...
Oct 14, 2014 -
Re: Foxglove: Chapter Three
Hey jazzy! I saw you post the third and fourth chapter for this in the Will Review For Food Forum when I was lurking said forum earlier, so I figured ...
Oct 14, 2014 -
Re: The Desert Rose - 1
Stellaaaaaaaaaaaaa hi. I got really excited when I saw you'd posted something, especially when I noticed it was an opening chapter because novels are my faves. Anyway, I really enjoyed ...
Oct 14, 2014 -
Re: Balance - Chapter 3.2 [SCRAPPED]
So, chapter 3.2! This was a good follow-up to chapter 3.1, so kudos to you for that. I really loved the concept of someone (the youth) being addicted to magic, ...
Oct 12, 2014
