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  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: A Test of Will

    Hey there! Here to review per request :) Ah, I love this. It's written so well, and makes me question why on earth I've not read anything else of yours ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Other Re: Psych

    Hey there! Here to review per request :D I loved this concept. It was wonderfully unique and super creative, and actually reminds me of something I wrote when I was ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Me again! Tension build up in my arm as I readied for the throw. I'm not sure if this is written intentionally so that it sounds all dramatic and stuff, ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Friends of Windows (title still in the works) 1.2

    It's me again :P OOOOOO STUFF. This is super intriguing. Despite only now being introduced to Claire, I am super fond of her character. Character is a big deal for ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 5.2

    Wassuuuuup! "Get's really cold in the night. Near 30 degrees, almost." I keep reading your degrees and being like omg that's boiling, but then I remember you're referring to fahrenheit ...

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: .

    Why, hello there. I'm honestly so happy you asked me to do this. I've always wanted to read Cat Steps since I was a YWS fetus. I just never seemed ...

    Mar 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Luneset 01OLD OUTAKES

    ohhithere. So this was pretty awesome. I can't say I've read anything the slightest bit similar to this, so 10/10 for originality. Ellie (or Fiel? I always feel wrong referring ...

    Mar 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Friends of Windows (open to title suggestions) 1.1

    Obviously, I had to check this out. You literally just have to roll with it. That pun tho. This is such a cool idea. Originality is something that makes me ...

    Mar 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter eight; I'm really not good at focusing!

    I was wondering what had happened to this! I'm super pleased that you've started posting it again :) I like that we're seeing Joe explore his powers now, and the ...

    Mar 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: TACJ Part 1: 1

    Hey! I figured I'd come straight to this after reviewing your poem because, what can I say? I am wild . I read your introduction, of course, so hopefully I'll ...

    Mar 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This Smile Means I'm Laughing

    'Sup! Now I probably should've inserted a disclaimer in that wall post saying that I know nothing about poetry, and that my poetry reviews are generally me flailing about the ...

    Mar 7, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Dive- Chapter 1

    Hey there cakerissa, long time no see! :P Okay, I've no idea if you will have ever heard of this, but my favourite show as a kid was H2O, and ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 6

    Considering it took me a while to get to your last few chapters, I'm glad I can get to this one a little quicker! :P This chapter had some nice ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 5.1

    You know it's going to be a decent day when you wake up to the smell of bacon. Never have I read words so true. YAY HOVERBOARDS. This follows up ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 4.2

    hidere. You had some really nice character development in this chapter, particularly with Ben, so that was really great. I wanted to high-five Maggie when she had her outburst and ...

    Mar 3, 2016


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