SimplyMe

I can totally RELATE to this! Bravo! Whoo!

I read the whole thing but it's too long to criticise, even for me. But I couldn't find a way to criticise it anyway so... GOLD-STAR!

I think you should... I’ve spread my wings, Make this a semicolon. I’m ready to fly, Make this a full stop. Why must you stop me one more time, To ...

I noticed too. She obviously did it for points. So anyway! That poem was really sad. I wouldn't like to feel that way, nor would anyone. Yay! That's the first ...

Geez, such a sweet story. I'm almost crying. I stopped believing when I was seven (all my moms fault). She said Santa had got stuck with his SLEIGH in the ...

The main thing that you should work on is verb choice. Your verbs are so bland! You use depart, but that sounds too much like a train station thing and ...

I'm working on making both ''The knife of love'' and ''If you did'' longer. And while I was doing it, I came up with 2 other poems that I'll post ...

That was cool. I agree with Forever Threnody (What kind of username is that?). It has an awesome rythm. And yes, the poem was simple yet wonderful. At this pace ...

It seemed kind of unoriginal. Like this is what the average 13-year-old would write. Please don't be offended by that, I still liked it. That's 'cause you don't know how ...

Cool poem! When I started reading this I thought of other things you could of used instead of a butterfly. But well, not gonna annoy you with that. All what ...

Cool poem! When I started reading this I thought of other things you could of used instead of a butterfly. But well, not gonna annoy you with that. All what ...

ooh, I liked that alot!!! It was so cool that it was spanish too!! You're really good at writing. Keep posting stuff so I can read! Lol :D Darn.... This ...

I loved the poem but it's kinda depressing, I'm sorry... :D. I'll do a report later, 'cause I'm in IT right now. Carry on writing!

Love the poem. You made a few mistakes that Layleun spotted out. If I understood the message correctly I liked it, and, frankly, if I didn't IT'S JUST POETRY ISN'T ...

Sorry it's a bit big but here's the image that inspired me to write this poem.