Silversun

Oh my! I really just can't bring myself to nitpick on this! This piece is just so intense! Everything about it is utterly horrible, from the baby-faced doctor Montgomery to ...

Hey, I'm not going to nit pick, since I really can't so I'll just say a few things. I found this poem well written and very descriptive. I loved teh ...

Hello, I just wanted to say this is expertly written and that you really portrayed the emotions clearly and well. Basically everything I've wanted to say has been taken, from ...

Hello there, well personally, I've read Karstens comments and would like to add my own opinion of them. Personally, I believe this wasn't set up during the Medevial Ages. Maybe ...

*First of all, this makes me really sad that you wrote such a lovely poem, with forever love, and now you guys have broken up. I'm sorry about that. *Butttt, ...

Hello! Reading that spoiler really did help clear up some things for me, but some other things remained a mystery. Obviously you knew this was going to confuse some people, ...

Hey I'm not really here with as many nitpicks as the rest of these good people, but I did want to let you know how intrigued I am by this ...

Hey there! Man, that story was great. It seemed like a prolouge really, but I'm going to call it a story anyway. :P The way you wrote it was beautiful, ...

Hello there! I've got only a couple of comments really. If I tell them who I really are I think the are should be am. I think the chorus should ...

Hola! I'm here for reviewing duty! Well it's not really a duty since I love it, but here it goes :) Reach out with fingers, that fall short. I don't ...

Hey there! I liked it although, There were a couple of rough spots for me. I really wish I could hear the music to it, if you have some in ...

I'm not going to lie..this really creeped me out..which was probably your objective, so congrats! Man, that part where she talked about hanging the boy's skin on her wall actaully ...

Hello! I really liked this piece and have a few things to say: First of all, I don't know if you noticed, but the spacing is a little weird. It's ...

Hey there! I generally enjoyed the story and for the most part it kept me entertained. There are only a couple things that I have to nit-pick about though :) ...

Wow that was very nicely written. I'm not much of a nitpicker on grammatical things and such, but I do have a couple of really quite minor suggestions. First of ...