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Chapter Two is up!

Chapter Two is up!

Chapter Two is up!

Most of your questions are answered by the first chapter and the prologue. :-) Even if you don't review those, I think it would help you a lot if you ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed my piece. I'm afraid I don't have a lot of time to respond at the moment, but I wanted ...

It wasn't allowing me to have a blank line between stanzas, so I've found a temporary solution. :-) It isn't the best, but I suppose it will work for now.

Hello! Thank you for your review of this piece. I'm not sure what happened with my editing, but this originally did have stanzas- you can assume where the cut offs ...

Thank you r your review! I want to be clear that this was not intended to be some sort of narrative about a specific couple, but about the concept of ...

Oh my, I don't know why it posted that response so many times. So sorry!

I tried to keep the insane vocabulary to a minimum, as one of the last poems I wrote- which I did not upload here, but shared with friends in person- ...

I tried to keep the insane vocabulary to a minimum, as one of the last poems I wrote- which I did not upload here, but shared with friends in person- ...

I tried to keep the insane vocabulary to a minimum, as one of the last poems I wrote- which I did not upload here, but shared with friends in person- ...

I tried to keep the insane vocabulary to a minimum, as one of the last poems I wrote- which I did not upload here, but shared with friends in person- ...

I tried to keep the insane vocabulary to a minimum, as one of the last poems I wrote- which I did not upload here, but shared with friends in person- ...

"not good enough to make someone jealous." The fact of the matter is that you did, so clearly you are.