Sillia

Hi, Sillia here. So i really like this, although I hope you don't mind if i make a couple suggestions. So format. With the wording you have and the mood ...

Sillia here! If your doing a type of narrative like this, it would be better to take out the name, it would add more of a dramatic flare to the ...

Hi, Sillia here! this is a really well written poem and i really really like it! :3 There is possibly only a few things that I would suggest you change. ...

Hey, Sillia here. Ok well.....First off Gea and Uraenus weren't siblings. Gea was the Mother Earth, and Ureanus was the Father Sky, so he was the sky. and saying 'they ...

Hey, Sillia here! Greek Mythology is among my top 5 favorite things so I thought i'd give this a shot. If you think you have experienced a dangerous or adventurous ...

Hey Sillia here. I really like the story line so far, i though it was very well written and very well though-out. [/quote] And who was to say that there ...

Hey, Sillia here! His top hat was sitting on his lap, looking rather agreeable on his knees, and my mother was in a yellow dress, her golden hair all done ...

Hi, Sillia here! I've read the first chapter i believe, and i've been keeping an eye on this for a while, and saw no one had yet left a review ...

Hi, Sillia here. So this is a pretty decent chapter so far. But, in all honesty, it could use some work. I like your word choice and it seems like ...

This is a really good poem. I like how at first it seems like it is talking about a women, then continues to show that you are speaking about the ...

Hi there, Sillia here. I kinda just jumped into your story, so its a little confusing to me. But i hope to give you a good review all the same. ...

Hi, Sillia here! This was a little confusing for me, but only because i have not read any of the other chapters, so i'm sure your other works explain it ...

Hey, Sillia here! This is a really good story. I had a lil trouble understanding something, but partly to the fact that i jumped into the chapter without reading the ...

Hi, Sillia here! I really liked the way this first part is written. They format that you have it in reminds me of the Rick Rordian books. At first i ...

Hey, Sillia here. This is very very well written. I love the description and time that you put into this. You obviously went very deep into yourself to bring forth ...