Sierra

Ooh. Wow. You have some skill here, to be able to tear my heart out, eat it, then shove it back into my chest. Bravo :) So, down to business. ...

Wow. This is really, really good. I love the emotion and the idea behind it and it really just captures me. Today, you start. Great hook. You’re running from the ...

Wow. This is really amazing. The emotional depth was great and it was so sweet. I don't know how to express my love towards you It cannot be said in ...

They caught him, the one black as pitch, and held him against his will. He shudders amidst the fences, despondent and degraded, hanging his head. Why won't they just set ...

Hi :) I'm going to do a structure/theme/clarity sort of review, as it seems Vapor and SassyKat already have the grammar-y part covered. I like the Dr. Seuss-esque style, however, ...

One review, as requested! :) I love the raw emotion. I totally get what you are trying to say, and I think it's very relate-able. I wouldn't really consider this ...

Here I am to tel you how awesome you are :) Really, this is amazing. Powerful and deep and sad and haunting and also kind of creepy - but the ...

So the story goes… You g all in love with him – you mean 'fall' right? a prince and a peasant girl. He’ll never stray from you, love you forever. ...

I'm walking through these empty halls , F filled with memories of you , S surrounded by a silent darkness Y your feelings break through . And I feel your ...

If life were so simple, why would the bitter rage continue to stay ? As if my atti t ude define d who I was. But I know there was ...

HI! I'm Sierra, and I'll be you're reviewer today :) Hehe, I know I'm only thirteen and this is rated 18+, but rules are meant to be broken :) Personally, ...

Flowing through your being, silently You think your dreaming. This is my favorite stanza. I really like the way it flows. It changes who you are, slowly Soon you've gone ...

Inside the envelope there is nothing. Nice opening line. It hooked me right away. Rippling words that flowed over paper And dripped, tasty, from red lips have failed me. This ...

Wow. This is really cool. I love the new take on Jesus. The beginning is kind of confusing. I couldn't tell who was talking, and why, and who they were ...

I like it :) Very haunting. I especially loved the ending. I would like to see more emotion, more feeling. When he's running, how does he feel? Is he terrified? ...