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Re: The Dark Tower by Stephen King
sorry
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns
Yes
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Third Son - Chapter Six of Shattered Crowns
It's beautifully written, carry on .I did see a couple of typos, but nothing that hindered your message. A few words here and there might be tweaked, but overall it's ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: Fear
Your poem flows like a stream,Smooth and seems more than a poem of a young seems it has been written by a person with years of has now become one ...
Dec 21, 2016 -
Re: the perfect student
I feel it can be related by students all over the world.The poem's beauty is in its simplicity much like 'Less is more.' Will be really be looking forward for ...
Dec 20, 2016 -
Re: Confessions from Depression: A Memoir
Review different poems and stories for points so you can post works...:-)
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: The Beauty of Lies - Part II
Wow, that is some good expression. Personally I like the way you used less words, but still be able to convey the emotion. {cons} there's no punctuation, and it's a ...
Aug 3, 2016 -
Re: Castellum Chapter 2
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Aug 2, 2016
Overall though, your description is very good. I'm not being very critical. These are just things to think about when you're writing. Overall this was a great chapter and I ... -
Re: Castellum Chapter 2
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Aug 2, 2016
Overall though, your description is very good. I'm not being very critical. These are just things to think about when you're writing. Overall this was a great chapter and I ... -
Re: Castellum Chapter 2
Overall though, your description is very good. I'm not being very critical. These are just things to think about when you're writing. Overall this was a great chapter and I ...
Aug 2, 2016 -
Re: guppy fields
Oh wow! I love your writing style! I love the connection you made between yourself and the water. It is so vivid in my mind, I absolutely love it! Great ...
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: I am as delicate as a shard of glass
This was amazing.
May 17, 2016
