Shootingmoons

Hey Imaginer, nice to see you! I believe this is the first story I've seen by you (I don't get on here very often). This review is going to be ...

Hey! I know that you have done a couple reviews for me, so I'll do one for you. I'm only fourteen, so whatever I tell you is probably something you ...

This is awesome. I love the suspense to this. And what I absolutely love is how you jump right into the action, it leaves the reader wanting more. I'm only ...

Hi Trashcan! This was the my first story to pop up in the Green Room, and I am so excited that you posted another chapter! Let's get right on to ...

Hey! Soooo I noticed you were new here, so I just want to say... Welcome! Anyways, I am not going to go into full detail, I'm just going to nit-pick ...

Hey! First of all, I just want to point out that you joined on my birthday, haha :P Was that awkward? Anyways, let's just jump right into it! I am ...

Hi! (^was that awkward?) This review is more grammar-related then plot, so let's jump in I guess. First of all, I just want to point out that the capitalization isn't ...

Hey Revialle, I loved your chapter! Here's a 'lil review... Whenever you're writing dialogue, at least have some dialogue tags, you know like you indicate who is saying what. Example: ...

Hey! I really liked the concept of your short story. It makes me really excited to see a fellow thirteen year-old writer on here as well. Anyways... The way you ...

I honestly really enjoyed this. I love the way you described Felix as he ran down the hallway in a distressed manner... "Sobs pleaded for release, but he swallowed them ...