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Re: The Only One I'm Dreaming of.
Hey Elinor :) Thanks for the review! It helped :) Well i was thinking of making it like an introduction, and then answering all the questions along the way you ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
Hey, sorry I forgot to add, I think you should fix this. “You said that before. It’s not giving up doughnuts, Jimmy. It’s quitting nicotine.” I don't think that quitting ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: China & Europe - Contradicting Colonies
I know, but in Asian Studies we were told to act like it was. -.-
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: Emilia
Thank you! You did help Kyousuke. We had a time limit and a word limit, so I had to rush the events :S Or I thought it wouldn't be as ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: The Effect of Confucianism on Gender Equality in China
@Forestqueen808; I'm REALLY glad that you liked it! :) Thanks for the review. @Kyllorac; I understand where you're coming from, I have a bad habit of adding a hidden level ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Everything About That Night
Thanks so much everyone. @alecmoran I haven't worked on this in AGES, but I think I need to explain more and basically do what you said, thanks for the review ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Adolescence- The crappiest time of your life.
@time8keeper, THANK YOUU ! :D i'll work on the typos :) @Ashleigh Brown, thanks hun :) @xXTheBlackSheepXx, your review did help, A LOT! thanks so much for taking the time ...
Oct 25, 2009 -
Re: Love so pretty yesterday.
This is REALLY good. Only some minor things to fix. It's "innocence". Maybe it would be better to say, "To shelter dreams of lost tomorrow"? Otherwise, I really liked it ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Adolescence- The crappiest time of your life.
@Meep(: Hey, thanks for the comment ! I really appreciate your comment, not joking one bit :) you're SO nice and I love hearing praise about my story haha (: ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Painting Love
It's really gripping. Ahh i want to know if Rebecca got married to the Irish guy! Did she? You should really continue both the stories (: They're both really great. ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: Oblivious
Hey guys ! Thanks for the replies ;D I'm going to change it now, and edit it later (: hahaha. Thanks you! x
Jun 17, 2009 -
Re: Adolescence- The crappiest time of your life.
Hey guys! Thanks for the awesome feedback (: I really appreciate it. Okay, so I kind of suck at punctuation, especially between conversations between characters (that didn't really make sense, ...
Jun 16, 2009 -
Re: The Orange-Striped Cat
I like this poem, but try using more descriptive words :) It would make it more interesting.
Jun 14, 2009 -
Re: Loss - Part 1
James picked up his wits and sprinted towards the camp. I don't quite understand this quote.. Also, you start a lot of your sentences/paragraphs with James did, etc.
Jun 14, 2009