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No doubt the poem was random.OMG!Look the spider is on ur head. Your siggy:My fav is not Batista,i like John Cena.I've a friend who likes Batista.

Thanks Adam! That was really helpful,I'll try to redo it. And yeah I got it were exactly the problem is.

yeah may be i do.

Max McKali wrote:the BFG and The Witches were definitely my favorites. anyone read "Revolting Rhymes"? they're hysterical, he takes some of the famous fairy tales (red riding hood, cinderella, snow ...

Thanks piepiemann22 for reading it. Surely haikus are good. Thanks RR !Yeah i think C can be in small caps too. Glad u liked it. -Ani

It would be nice to use some puntuations in this poem.

Yep read this book and it was good.

lilizard wrote:Three words: best. children's. writer. I have never read a children's book that has such a good combo of wittiness, flow, and plots than Roahld Dahl. Thats true. lilizard ...

Thanks BFG,glad u liked it.:)

Sureal:Thanks for the review and pointing out the mistakes.

If I were to pick my favorite children's novel by Dahl, I would most likely have to pick between The Witches and Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. If I were ...

Wow a story related to East Bengal,that was really good. That was touching and lovely. And ending was good too. By the way do u know I live in West ...

Cx:Thanks glad u liked it. :) Dan:Thanks for the advice and yes limericks are better. :) green_river:Thanks for reading it. :) Parachute fly high up and through the clouds to ...

thats great he is world famous!

I thought this would be a chemistry related book. What is the book really about? Yeah u can say that i am lazy.