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What about my question that I asked that should I replace requisite with necessary?? -sayani :)

Thank you so much Zell :) And yes of course I agree with you on the poll thing. :) -sayani.

Thanks to you all for appreciating my work, and for the kind words. :) I’ll soon take away the poll cuz I think you all are right that who cares ...

Thanks Addie!! Yeah I will surely try to make it more mysterious and good. And welcome to yws :) ( I guess u are new.) See u around :wink:

I don't care whether it is a haiku or something else. It should have sense or have some meaning, that is what really matters. In the above poem it had ...

Thanks!! :) I edited the 'off'.Let me see if I can change things in this and make it interesting.

Keep up the good work! :) There are two spelling errors: dissapeared?? essense??

Yep! Second is better.

Hi Kaitlyn!! Good job!The rhyming was good.Liked it :)

LoL u've got Nate's avatar. the poem is short and sweet.(infact very short) The rhyming is good. :)

Ok,not bad!! Why is it Farse?? :? You've a few spelling errors like: insignifigant?? inconsibable ??

Good job :) But the last chorus was not that impressing(mainly the last two lines, it sounded to be just a poem)

Good job! I liked the chorus part and yes of course I liked the theme too. :)

Great!!

Thanks! :) Yep!there is a bit of punctuation error(the commas),cuz I have copied exactly the thing which I wrote 1yr ago.