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Re: I Think of You
The poem was indeed sweet but it didn't have a definite plot. It lacks a bit of rythm,and the 9th and the 10th line is a bit too long breaking ...
Oct 27, 2006 -
Re: Flying high
Preety good.
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: moon song
Ah!the poem is actually very sweet. I think this would have gone under lyrics. The rythm was fine. The ending of the song is nice.
Oct 26, 2006 -
Re: Flowers and Birthday Cards
The ending was touchy. Well done!
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Men
The poem lacks rythm,and lacks perfection. Begining was more or less good but the ending was bit something like rude/harsh. Keep writing,u have lots to learn.
Oct 25, 2006 -
Re: Elegy for the Son of Man
lol ok, i liked it cuz it was something really different.
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Poem deleted
Could have done it better. Keep writing!
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Loves Mysteries
WOw the poem was really good, and u chose a wonderful topic to write on that is 'Love Mysteries'. Well done.
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Following My Heart (Through Seasons of Despair)
I would have preffered some more puntuation in between the lines.Or else the whole poem seems to be a run-on line poem. I like thetitle very much,and ofcourse the poem ...
Oct 24, 2006 -
Re: Just Know
hmmm..that was nice. Kepp up ur good job.
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Junk
not really...
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Freelight
Simply awesome.
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Untitled
Well done niteowl.
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Ideas?
Yeah i agree with Eli about the something,it makes it sound vague. I liked the ending. Keep up ur good job. -Ani
Oct 23, 2006 -
Re: Demon overlord
OK,now kiddo I want to see some serious good stuffs by you. Or is this a idea or a plan to get everyones attention?
Oct 23, 2006