Shearwater

Hi, Italian! I’m here to do this review. I know you mentioned that you also needed some help with the first and second chapter so I’ll work my way to ...

Hey there, StreetRat! I'm going to review this small snippet for you. "Lately I've been thinking about how I love the way you blow smoke out of your mouth, and ...

Hey there, Ikerot! Sorry for being a tad late to the party but as promised, here's another review for the revised version of this first chapter. Firstly, I want to ...

Hey, Monotone! Sorry for getting to this a little late but as promised, here is your review. Also, I think this is, like Stella mentioned, quite gripping and I did ...

Alright, I’m back for more. I just want to say that the fight scene was awesome. The fact that you got Sadie’s hands dirty was enough to make me launch ...

Ahoy! Dudette, I’m here to review this chapter of yours. Bare with me... Firstly, I want to talk about Sadie and her friend, Niamh drinking on outside. They’re quite childish, ...

Yo, Dudette! I said I was going to review this novel for you so here I am. I'm about three parts late but don't hate me for it. ^^ Anyway, ...

Hey, Lily! I'm here to review this for you. I'm sorry for being a little late to the party. ^^ So, firstly I'd like to say that I don't know ...

Hey there, Senshi! I’m here to review for you! The Illiturate Alliterist arrested a rhyme that rang loud proud strong over a crowd of booming beluminous belloing bellowers. I’m not ...

Hey there, I’m here to review this next chapter for you. ^^ We are gathered here today to mourn the passing of Thomas Herrick Foster. A beloved husband, son and ...

Hey there! I'm here to review this lovely chapter of yours. Without further ado, let's begin! I think your first sentence is good, it’s interesting and does grab my attention ...

Hey there, Lume! I'm here to do this review for you, sorry it took me some time to get here. Firstly, I just have a few nitpicks that I want ...

Hey there! Sorry it took a while to get to this, just have to plow through that list... Anyway, I'm here so let's take a look at this prologue! The ...

Hey there, Gg! I'm here to review as requested. "Such giants we are to such a soul, Tangible, but not to touch! For this creature, lacking camouflage, Is capable of ...

Hey, there! Sorry for taking super long to get to this review but I'm here now. ^^ Anyways, a few nitpicks and then we'll get to the good stuff. I, ...