Shearwater

Hi Bluejay, Pink here -dropping by for a short review- So, I really did like this poem and I liked the descriptions you used. The imagery was also nice :) ...

Hey Coral! It's me, Pink (no duh) But yes, I saw you posted another poem and I usually read all the ones you post but for some reason I really ...

Hi! Pink here :) So, I agree with what Retrodisco said about the whole stanza and thing. I felt like it kept going and there were no breaks, but even ...

Hiya! Pink here, dropping by for a review ;) Nitpicks and with it all the freedom that I’d had. This kinda like a double, I had had. Get it? Haha, ...

Hi Klucy! Shear here ;) I'll be reviewing this for you today. European cities cold never compete. I think you meant could. I know what you were thinking full well”. ...

Hiya! Well first of all, I love this. I love the emotion and the depth you've put into your writing. Although, there was the repetition, it worked and it made ...

Hey, Snoink! So, I actually read this first and was like, "Huh? I don't get it." Then, I went back and read the other two 'chapters' you had up in ...

Hey Coral! C'est moi, again, Pink :) So, love this poem. It was funny, sweet, although it was short... I wish it was bit longer - but then again, sometimes ...

Yikes, I just got chills. Very good. I mean at first I was like, 'Huh?" Mostly because I didn't understand the setting and I thought they were in the park ...

Hi GuoPing! Pink here :) I'm going to review in four categories and no real nitpicks because I didn't really spot any that needed to be addressed. Alright! :3 Introduction ...

Hi! Pink here! I liked this poem, I liked the way it sounded and the way it all flowed easily. The simplistic view and as Weaver said, the great imagery, ...

Hello, Pink here :) Okay, I like the message you are sending. Yes, drugs do ruin lives and I like how you point at one person's experience and say that ...

Hiya, Pink here! Alright, I liked it. The idea of the end of world, nice. I liked your characters and how it seemed as if they didn't really care or ...

Hi Meg! Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS, hope you enjoy you time here! So, I'm not going to nitpick through this, instead, I'm going walk through this ...

Hi Jamie! Pink here, dropping by for a review. Okay, so let's get started, shall we? The next, she could not feel or think or move. I don't like the ...