Shearwater

Jalmoc! I don't even recall the last time I read your writing but I'm glad I'm given the chance now. So, as a heads up, I like to review as ...

Hi there, Zohali! I'm going to do a review for this. I usually review as a read so bare with me on a few things and I'll be starting with ...

Hey, Dudette! I'm back to review this part of chapter three. So far, I did like it and I'm glad you didn't just jump into the Chace/text fiasco right away ...

Hey, McGuy! So, I’m here to review this next part. Sorry for being a bit late. I enjoyed this part of the chapter and your writing is wonderful. Your sense ...

Hey there, Creative! So I'll be doing a quick review for this today. I'm going to say, I totally saw the end coming. However, I did not see the whole ...

Hey, Psu! So the reason I wanted to come and review this for you is because the beginning of this chapter really caught me by surprise since it was similar ...

Hi there! I'm here to review this piece for you. This should be a quick review so bare with me. Firstly, formatting. YWS has got a weird formatting system and ...

Hi there, I'm here to review this piece for you! The beginning of this is like a profile for an online dating site and not a very good way to ...

Hey there, I'm here to review this prologue for you! So, I will agree with the review below me about the language in here being a little weird. I'm not ...

Hi there, I'm here to review this for you. Firstly, I want to mention that your bold and italic formatting is quite distracting and you might want to just keep ...

Hey, McGuy! I’ve been meaning to do a review for you for a while now since you did one for me, so I was happy to see your request! My ...

Hey there! So this review is going to be kind of short because I've mentioned some pretty main points in the two previous reviews so I can't really say anything ...

Okay, Italian. I’m here to review this first chapter for you. Again, I’d like you take note of what I mentioned in your prologue about formatting. Additionally, I’m going to ...

Hey, Dude! So I’m here to review this chapter. Firstly, I want to say that Saddie’s mom’s reaction to her daughter coming home drunk is a little weird, like she ...

Hey there, Guinea! So, since this is a longer chapter I’m not going to be as nitpicky as Dude for the sake of my sanity but I’ll give you some ...