Shearwater

Hey Silent. 'Sup? Just kidding. Pink here :) Alright, so I think this poem was quite nice. Deep and meaningful and held a pretty good rhyme scheme. The message that ...

Yo, Alfredo. Cool name ;) Pink here, to review. Alright, your first opening paragraph rhymes a bit in some places and it was almost like it song. Well, to me ...

I am feeling in a peculiar delusion - my emotions are animated and the mirror reflects a talcun (No idea what talcun is. As Leebass said, did you mean talcum ...

Hi Jenny! Here to review ^^ First of all, I have not read the previous reviews so I'm sorry if anything I state has already been said. Alright, so interesting ...

Hey Puppets! Daddy's here to review. Now, I didn't read the previous post since I'm in a hurry so forgive me if this is a bit repeated. Tranquillity surrounds me; ...

Hey, Roal! Here to review, my apologizes for being late. I was surprise. I am surprised? Present tense. Sounds of stepping grass Grass cannot step. I know what you mean, ...

Hello, Flower! Again, I will apologize beforehand for my tasteless review. I are not a poet. =) My smile fades away as memories tug at the corner of my mind. ...

Hey, Spike. Whoa, you're from India? Very cool, I'm Indian as well. 'Cept I live in the States. Nice to meet you. ^^ Anyway, I also suck at reviewing poetry ...

Hey, Carbon. Here to review :) My apologizes for being late, I've been busy lately. :P Also, may I take a second to compliment you? I think your writing skill ...

Hi Rain! Pink here, dropping by for a review :) As he lay on the ground, taking deep, painful breaths, the man stared at the blue sky that floated above ...

Hello, Lee. Pink here. :) I find this piece quite interesting and deep. Sweet and bitter. In the beginning I wasn't quite sure where you were going with this but ...

Hey Sio! Pink here :) So, the first thing I noticed here is the excessive use of "I". When writing in first person it's important to stray away from using ...

Hi, Roal! Yes, I apologize. I'm terribly late. However, I have fought through the wild forest and made it out alive, just so I could review this splendid piece of ...

Hey, Whisper! I'm here! So, generally, I don't have many nitpicks for this one. I'm sure you're delighted to hear that. I'm finding this story somewhat a bit difficult to ...

Hi Alexxa! Pink here, I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. ^^ So, there are a few points that I want to point out first, then I'll get on ...