Shearwater

Hey, Ziggie! Nitpicks/Comments Her hand twitched a little. This distracted her from her thoughts for a moment. She had been sitting on a sofa in the living room for hours ...

Hey, Wing! Pink here. Nitpicks/Comments In a room far from the rifts of reality stood two people. For many years the two never met, gazing forever at the world, yet ...

LPR, you are truly worthy of the penguin badge. ^^ So, first of all...I loved this story. Not just because you put me in here and stuffed it with penguin ...

Bleh. I'm here. I'm late. But I'll review. Nitpicks/Comments He looked down at the grass that covered his front garden. Unnecessary. You don't have to tell us he looked at ...

Hey, Crafty! Pink here! :) Nitpicks/Comments The clouds fade to black and I'm soaring through night. I'd be scared but it's hard to be scared of nothing. So dark... You ...

Pink sheets you must lay over crops to be Sheared, and oh, don't you forget the Water! Yays! =3 You deserve a penguin for this! Totally.

Oy, Corey. ;) Pink is 'ere. Nitpicks/Comments "Oh! Oh! OH!... The gods themselves must have smiled down on this doomed hometown of mine today!" the doom-sayer shouted. "Heed the words ...

Hey, Sprites! (I keep wanting to spell it Spirte!) So, I'm here to review but it seems like you've gotten so many nice reviews already and Jai is amazing at ...

Hey, Idra! Here as requested. I noticed that you said something about critiquing based on characterization but because I have not read the previous 7 chapters I feel as if ...

Hey, Riven! Nitpicks/Comments My breathing quickened as I glanced over my shoulder. Fresh bursts of speed were used as I tried to outrun my invisible pursuers. Driven on by the ...

Hey Silent! Okay, the reason why I don't get many poetry request is because I epically stink at poetry. But, some people are brave enough to request reviews on poems ...

Hey, Nic! Pink here. Seems like the use of of the word 'shit' kind of made me lift a brow. It was flowing nicely and deeply until that, it made ...

Hey, Ribbons! I'm glad you finally posted something, I was eager to read this excerpt from your novel. I've been hearing so much from you and it really sounds interesting ...

Hey, Coral! Aye, racism? What a touchy topic... Remember, I stink at reviewing poetry so if you disagree with anything that I might say, I'm sorry. =( You think you ...

Hey, Idra! It felt like yesterday we were still friends. When I woke up today, I wanted to be friends again. This whole bit is very simple. You're not really ...