Shearwater

Hey, Shubhi! Here to review! So, I'm not going to be nitpicky because it seems like there are quite a bit of misused words in here and I don't feel ...

This was supposed to be funny, right? Because it definitely made me laugh. Now, there are a few faults in your argument but I suppose it's just opinionated (kinda?) and ...

Hey, Whisper! Oh, poetry! My one true weakness....argh. Anyway, considering that I am a totally wimp when it comes to poetry, I shall still try to give you my best ...

Hey Dad! Here to review! Nitpicks/Comments The man stood at the front of the temple, head raised to the ceiling. His robes draped over his shoulders, making him appear as ...

Gladius! 8D So, here as requested and I have to say, I truly enjoyed this. ^.^ Well, I'm not going to do a whole nitpicky review for you because I'm ...

Hiya! I'm here to review, as promised. Nitpicks/Comments The sun was starting to rise on the horizon; the cold air hit her face as she opened the window, all around ...

Hi, Forever! Pink here, as requested. This poem is actually a bit choppy and the flow is off, alright. It seems a bit hard to read and get into. Actually, ...

Whoo, first! Nitpicks/Comments “I was not,” the woman said in a firm manner . “My family came from the Shadow region.” No, don't do this...please? You must learn to hold ...

Hey, Freak! Whut up? Here to review ;) So, I'm not going to review by nitpicking since my wrist hurt from typing, hope you don't mind. Anyway, I must agree ...

Hey Meep! First of all, I can't help it if I'm popular, lol. Just kidding. ^^ Anyway, I'm here as requested. So, I'm not going to do a whole nitpicky ...

Heya! Here to review. So this review is going to be a little on the short side since it's review day and I want to cram as many reviews as ...

Hiya! I'll be reviewing this for you today. So, first of all let me start by saying that this is actually my first attempt at reviewing lyrics. I listen to ...

Hey, Momo! I'm Pink, I'll be doing a quick review for you today. ^^ First of all, there are a few things regarding your grammar and punctuation that I want ...

Hiya! Here for quick review. Then she asked me if I was seeing anybody; like a man I said no, knowing that I had left my fiancée just 15 minutes ...

Hey, Pointe! Who is that who wears the red mask to hide her face? Why would she hide a face? This bit is like repetition of the first. In the ...