Shearwater

Hey, Sprite! Here to review! So first of all, I'm not very good at reviewing poetry. It is my biggest weakness next to penguin death... Anyway, here is my attempt. ...

Hey, Whisper! Here to review! ^.^ Nitpicks/Comments Amanda Collins and her mother had just moved into a new house – her new supposed-to-be home. She was seventeen and a half ...

Hey, Ellie! I'm here to review, I apologize for taking so long to get to it but I kept having little things pop up here and there. Anyway, it seems ...

Hi, Daughter. ^.^ I'm here to review! Nitpicks/Comments Goosebumps start to send chills all over your body but it isn’t the fact that you feel cold, rather you are nervous ...

Hi Ben! Here to review. ^^ It seems that I don't exactly need to get into the nitpicks since you have a very good understanding of punctuation and all. First ...

Hi Tyler! Here to review! Snowflakes landed on his armor and water from melted snow filtered through his layers of garment and chilled his skin. But it was not enough ...

Hey, Pally! I'm here to review. ^.^ Firstly, you imagery was pretty nice. Imagery is pretty important when it comes to poetry, right? I mean, that's what I've been told ...

Heya! Pink here! Since I have a few other things to do, I won't go into depth this piece. Which means, no nitpicks because they waste a lot of time. ...

Hi Rain, Pink here! I'm not going to do a whole nitpicking session because I feel like that's not really worth the time. I mean, you already have a solid ...

Hey, Pink here! Nitpicks/Comments Fluffy, creamy marshmallows dipped halfway in the unicorn cup full of hot cocoa just waiting to be devoured. Outside, it’s snowing. White, perfect snowflakes, each

Hey, Ellie! Here as requested! I don't have many nitpicks. It seems that you have a great understanding of your basic punctuation rules and all so I won't go into ...

Hi Angela! Thank you for requesting me, I'm here to review. I'll try to be as nice as I can but don't hate me if I sound somewhat harsh. Nitpicks/Comments ...

YAY! You posted more! Anyway, I shall still review this. Guido spoke sternly. Staring at the control panel Sniks stood at. Okay, I just noticed that Sniks is Skins backwards. ...

Hey Jashy! Remember I told you I might or might not review this? Well, I'm going to not review this! =D Instead, I'll just tell you how great it was. ...

Hey Jenth! Here to review. ^^ So I have a few nitpicks... The light from the moving torches –their high flames undaunted by the stinging rain– threw long and hideous ...