Shearwater

Hey, Alpha! I'm here to do a quick review for you. So, I really enjoyed this chapter...zero? Prologue? :D Not exactly sure what it is but I think it fits ...

H'okay! I'm back again! Okay so you really show Sadie's softer side and I do like Vera as well. I think the two are quite charming together but as Stella ...

Me again! Again, I'll be reviewing as I read. :3 “You did it Juliana!” Lucian shouted. He crawled close to the fire and began blowing on the flames. “I knew ...

Hey, Dude! (I always feel funny typing that but it's much better than McGuy xD) So, I'm really happy you posted this chapter! And I'm even more happy it's in ...

Okay, Sio! I love scripts! I've read a few of them but honestly, I've never actually reviewed one! So you're going to be my first and this is your first ...

Hey, Sio! So I'm here to do a review for you. I'm sorry for being late but I thought I'd take the Review day to hoard up on request and ...

Hey there! As a prologue, I think this accomplishes what you set out to do and that is basically let the readers know that there is a microscopic life that ...

Hey there! Sorry for being late! Basically, it seems like most of everything that should be said has already been said by previous reviewers. Because this is such a short ...

Heya, Dude! Sorry for being a bit late with this review. Anyway, I see that you've given your story a name but I gotta say, "Dragoon Story" is kind of ...

Hey there, ity! Welcome to YWS! I'll be reviewing this piece for you today. Firstly, this prologue doesn't really seem like a prologue. I think you could just add this ...

Hey there, Mono! I apologize for taking so long to get this review done. I swear I wasn't having a Supernatural marathon all week. Anyway, the first thing I want ...

Hey there, NHNT! I'm here to review, as requested. Now, I've read through your story and there are a few things you can still work on to improve it. Firstly, ...

Oh Vampire, you sucked the breath out of me. /badjoke I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I thought your spin on the classic fairytale in telling it from the mirror's ...

Hey there, Zohali! So I'm back to offer my thoughts on this edited chapter of yours. This review might be a tad long so just bare with me. ;) Firstly, ...

Mia! I'm here to review for you! So, I'll be reviewing as I read and I'll start off with a few nitpicks, nothing major because you know me, I hate ...