Shearwater

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying the site. Okay to begin with, it seems like you're a new writer. I've noticed many punctuation and dialogue errors that ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! ^^ So I liked your opener. It wasn't exactly a 'gotcha' but the idea behind it was nice and makes you think, gets the ...

Hey, Freak. Punk here, to review! I'm not going to be nitpicky. Oh what the heck, maybe I'll throw in a few. Here, take these. It was like a nipping ...

Hey there! I'm Pink, I'll be doing a short review for you today. First of all, this seems like a very cool dream. Normally, I don't usually dream or I ...

ChiquitaBanana, I so feel you. (It's alright if I call you that, yes? Punch me if otherwise. :3) I'm actually a terrible poet and I keep away from the poetry ...

Hey there, Tpak! I like this bit, it's neat to see the way your character takes in the whole transformation thing. Although it was an interesting passage I couldn't full ...

Hey, there Daughter! I'm going to review this for you today. This review is going to be a little short but hopefully you'll pick up at least one or two ...

Hi, Anshita! Pink here, dropping by for a short review. So, I loved the beginning. It was written well and it was definitely a puller. The whole I was surrounded ...

Hey, Ellie! Here to review. ;) “Sure,” Helena said, “That would be wonderful. May I take my blanket?” The 'that' here shouldn't be capitalized. When you're using an interruption or ...

*love it x infinity* Wow, this was amazingly terrible but so entertaining that it makes me want to seriously hut "hug" (typo) you. Here, have an internet hug, like seriously! ...

Hi there Dreamer! I'll be doing a short review for you on this. First of all, you seemed to do a lot of info dumping in this chapter. The first ...

Hey there Dragon! Your introduction to your piece could use some more power. It's a bit confusing with the lack of information that you have. Try to make this longer ...

Hey, there! =] So I actually enjoyed reading this. The story was quite wonderful and I liked you characters and the steady flow you had throughout this piece. However there ...

Hey there! I liked this poem, it was quite different and made me think. I thought I had a brief understanding of what you were trying to say but the ...

Hey there Monogo! Pink here, dropping by for a short review. Right now you're scaring away people with you info dump in the very beginning of your topic. You shouldn't ...