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Shearwater

  • Short Story » General, General Re: The stuffed toy applicant

    Hey, Yurii! I'm here to review this awesome piece of weidness that you pulled out of you head with a magical fork and yellow string. Now, I'm not going to ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Butcher's Son: A Novella (Prologue)

    Hi there, Jpah! Thank you for the request, I'm here to review this for you. ^^ I DIED ON JANUARY 12TH, 2006. Opening lines can be either important or non ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Addictive Personality

    Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^^ Nitpicks/Comments a small, grainy image from 1982. Remember to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of a new sentence. ...

    Apr 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: All's My Fault

    Hey there, ehte! Now before I begin I must tell you first that I'm a terrible poet and poetry reviewer. However, I always do my best to provide a decent ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Smoke and Fire: One

    Sprite! I missed you! D': I was actually really, really excited when you posted a request on my WRFF thread so I jumped onto this piece right away. ^^ (Also, ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Faded Whisper

    Hey there Jessa, Pink here. I'm not sure what this is either. It seems to be a mix between a really short story and a poem or some sort. You ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: God the Dealer

    Hey there! I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^^ so, in need of a spike you contact God. Remember proper grammar! ^^ The "so" should be capitalized since it's ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Hi there! I'm here to review this for you as requested! So, I did like this poem. It's not bad but it still needs a bit of tweaking here and ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)

    Hey there! I'm here to review this! Now, it seems like Azila got to it first and usually, after Azila does her reviews I'm left with little to say but ...

    Apr 11, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 1 (OUTDATED)

    Whoo! I'm here to review! Okay, so here we go... I liked it. Done. :D Kidding, of course. Now, I really do like the development of your story here. It's ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 1

    Hello, Son! I'm here to review for you! ^__^ Alright, so let's get started with this. …! Who had thought that this would happen to someone like me? Who’d thought ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)

    Kay, Shubbubbles, I'm here! So, as I said before my reviewing is slightly rusty and you also mentioned that you are afraid of my reviews and I don't like that. ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Through the Mist - Two

    Hi there! Pink here! I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I like this story, it seems like you have a pretty decent idea of where you're going ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Broken Spirits:Chapter 1

    Hi there! I'm Pink and I'll be doing a quick review for you today. ^^ There are few things that I'd like to point out with this piece that I ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Drive On, She Says

    Hi, Angela! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this for you today. Alright, it seems like Ellie already did a pretty good job of reviewing your characters and the larger ...

    Mar 27, 2011


Perhaps when we find ourselves wanting everything, it is because we are dangerously close to wanting nothing.
— Sylvia Plath