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Re: The stuffed toy applicant
Hey, Yurii! I'm here to review this awesome piece of weidness that you pulled out of you head with a magical fork and yellow string. Now, I'm not going to ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: The Butcher's Son: A Novella (Prologue)
Hi there, Jpah! Thank you for the request, I'm here to review this for you. ^^ I DIED ON JANUARY 12TH, 2006. Opening lines can be either important or non ...
Apr 18, 2011 -
Re: Addictive Personality
Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^^ Nitpicks/Comments a small, grainy image from 1982. Remember to capitalize the first letter in the beginning of a new sentence. ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
Hey there, ehte! Now before I begin I must tell you first that I'm a terrible poet and poetry reviewer. However, I always do my best to provide a decent ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Smoke and Fire: One
Sprite! I missed you! D': I was actually really, really excited when you posted a request on my WRFF thread so I jumped onto this piece right away. ^^ (Also, ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Faded Whisper
Hey there Jessa, Pink here. I'm not sure what this is either. It seems to be a mix between a really short story and a poem or some sort. You ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: God the Dealer
Hey there! I'll be reviewing this for you today. ^^ so, in need of a spike you contact God. Remember proper grammar! ^^ The "so" should be capitalized since it's ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.
Hi there! I'm here to review this for you as requested! So, I did like this poem. It's not bad but it still needs a bit of tweaking here and ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 2 (OUTDATED)
Hey there! I'm here to review this! Now, it seems like Azila got to it first and usually, after Azila does her reviews I'm left with little to say but ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Deserter - Chapter 2, Part 1 (OUTDATED)
Whoo! I'm here to review! Okay, so here we go... I liked it. Done. :D Kidding, of course. Now, I really do like the development of your story here. It's ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Parasite: The Corruptive Shadow - Chapter 1
Hello, Son! I'm here to review for you! ^__^ Alright, so let's get started with this. …! Who had thought that this would happen to someone like me? Who’d thought ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Turning the Tables(1.1)
Kay, Shubbubbles, I'm here! So, as I said before my reviewing is slightly rusty and you also mentioned that you are afraid of my reviews and I don't like that. ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Through the Mist - Two
Hi there! Pink here! I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I like this story, it seems like you have a pretty decent idea of where you're going ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Broken Spirits:Chapter 1
Hi there! I'm Pink and I'll be doing a quick review for you today. ^^ There are few things that I'd like to point out with this piece that I ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Drive On, She Says
Hi, Angela! I'm Pink and I'll be reviewing this for you today. Alright, it seems like Ellie already did a pretty good job of reviewing your characters and the larger ...
Mar 27, 2011
