Shearwater

Hey, there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! Okay, so first of all, I did like the story. It was interesting and I felt pulled into it. You opener ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this for you today! I liked it, it was moving in small way but I do think you could have written this out a little ...

I can walk around the room if move very slowly *If I move very slowly. but at least I won’t have to hurt Hoas. I hate this guy! And hate ...

H'OKAY! So like, I read the comments first and then I got all excited to read this! I know right, it's so awesome. :3 So anyway, here we go! I ...

Okay I'm back! Yay! lol So I feel extremely horrible for this child right now. I don't understand why her diary entries are still lacking some emotion though. I mean, ...

Okay, I'm here! Firstly, why do you have so many 'did's in your names? First it was Granidid and now this Archondid and if you want, you can consider the ...

Hey Snoink! I'm here to review. Well this won't actually be a review because for one fact, you already have so many other awesome reviews that my review would just ...

Hi there! I'll be reviewing this piece for you today! (Also, I'll be reviewing as I read.) My first impressions of this is cliche. I mean, you have someone popular ...

Okay so I'm back for more because that first chapter made me feel like, "WHOO!!" xD So I'm going to start with just a few nitpicks first! The trees had ...

Okay! I'm here for the next chapter! ^__^ Okay so your narration is a bit odd. Let's take this sentence for example: This meadow we were in was a small ...

Hey there partner! I'm here to review! So, I like this. It's a bit interesting but it seems a bit cliche at the moment but then again, a lot of ...

Hey there! I'm here to review! Okay, so firstly I want to talk about the first paragraph. It was definietly and a puller and I enjoyed reading it and it ...

Wifey! I'm really happy you posted this. I was kind of aching to read some of you writing for a while so getting another glance at your rewritten novel is ...

Hi, Decker! Pink here to review. ^^ I thank you for the request. So, I actually like this piece and I felt it, really. Your wording was simple, yes. Your ...

YAY! I can review something of yours now! ^_______^ Okay, so I liked this and I only found one nitpick. Her plump bottom lip quivers before she takes a step ...