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ShallowHouse

We are all different people all through our lives and that's okay, that's good you've got to keep moving so long as you remember all the people that you used to be.

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy

    Heyo, Foxmaster! Thanks for reviewing this old story of mine! Haven't actually done much with it, but I'm glad you liked it! And yes, I'll read and review your work! ...

    Feb 10, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Are you happy?

    Thank you for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the work! It's a piece I drew from personal experience and it's not perfect, but it's one I'm proud of!

    Feb 1, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Are you happy?

    Heya! Yes, you're right! It is a story about an old couple. I tried to keep it ambiguous since IRL, it can go either way, and I'm glad it got ...

    Feb 1, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Are you happy?

    Hello! Thank you for the review! It was honestly just a thirty minute 3 A.M. prompt I gave myself and it is based on a past experience, hence that one ...

    Feb 1, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue

    It's the first time I've heard of me giving off energy, but I'm glad! Also, yes, you can edit your published works through the Publishing Center! Good luck!

    Jan 24, 2023
  • Other » Science Fiction, Horror Re: just a little fanfic I've been working on. I've been stuck so i would really appreciate feedback

    Ah, yes! The mobile gacha game with anthropomorphized ships! I know that one. Yostar! I used to play Arknights so yeah. I bid you good luck on your fanfic!

    Jan 17, 2023
  • Other » Science Fiction, Horror Re: just a little fanfic I've been working on. I've been stuck so i would really appreciate feedback

    Hello, there! Shallow here for feedback! Not gonna review, since this is clearly an unfinished work. First of all, these big blocks of text... What you've written so far has ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Child in the Cave

    Oh, thank you for the review! Yes, I did find it lacking as is, but I decided to post it anyway just for the sake of having to put one ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Child in the Cave

    It's so nice of you to say that! I'm glad you found inspiration from this work of mine! Good luck on your writings! I'll be looking forward to what you ...

    Jan 14, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Child in the Cave

    Hullo, Alice! Thank you for reading my work, and I'm glad you like it! It's an old one, but I hope to write more in the future! In the meantime, ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Child in the Cave

    Hi, Ina! Thank you for reading this, it's an old work and I wanted to post it because I really had to get back to this good ol' site! I ...

    Jan 11, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Glitter - Chapter 1

    "Thank you for the review!" ShallowHouse bowed, "And I hope you like and read the next chapter!" Shallow made two finger hearts with a smile.

    Aug 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Glitter - Chapter 1

    Hiya, Lee! Thank you for the review and no apology needed! I need critical reviews as well so thank you for that! And I must admit, I wrote that when ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Glitter - Chapter 1

    omg I forgot I posted this! X3 Thank you so much for the review and I absolutely must thank you for the punctuation nitpicks! Anything beyond the comma and period ...

    Aug 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Train to Heaven

    Hi, legolas! I'm happy to know that you like my short story! ouo

    Jun 17, 2020


All truly wise thoughts have been thought already thousands of times; but to make them truly ours, we must think them over again honestly, till they take root in our personal experience.
— Johann Wolfgang von Goethe