Shady

Sounds good!

Hahaha I'm glad it was helpful

Thanks so much for all the reviews! I really appreciate it! Lol, soft spot for assassins. I love it haha. I'll be sure to tag you when I have the ...

Thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it! Is it confusing having the two Ainsleys in the first chapter? The War Lord is Jerica's uncle -- so they're both ...

Thanks so much for the review! Definitely helpful things to think about as I go about editing. I agree with everything you say... as you probably noticed, the beginning bit ...

Hey Rache, thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it! This chapter isn't quite the climax -- she's only been with Jayk and Glynn for a few weeks (which ...

Okay, thanks for the clarifications! :)

Oh, cool... I'm glad it helped! I was getting self-conscious about the review and wasn't sure if it was decent or not. Glad you found it useful!

Oh look at that, YWS has fixed the glitch that allowed two reviews on one work anyway lol. So behold, I give you the world's longest comment ;) hahaha

Anytime

Thanks for the reviews! I appreciate it! :D

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it! I definitely agree it could benefit from adding some more details. I'd welcome the feedback on the other chapters if you'd like to ...

The reason I put them in "" is to make it clear what was my suggestion for an edit and what was further explanation on my part. It would probably ...

Huh, that's really interesting... it's like the exact opposite of American English lol.

Makes sense haha