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Re: Without Destiny: Chapter 2
Hey Ethe! Shady here with your review. Sorry for the wait and thank you for the congrats! :D I did not read your other reviews, so sorry if I repeat ...
Feb 26, 2013 -
Re: Sins
Hey Jok! Shady here with a review for you lovely piece. This was to hide my sins from this world and the next, but I was a fool, for G ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Without Destiny: New Prologue
Hey indgo! Shady back for more of your wonderful writing! You, again, delivered us a very nice piece with few errors. Grammar, syntax, and spelling are all fine. Content is ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Without Destiny: Chapter 1
Hey indgo! Shady here with a review for your piece! :) As Xiira said, it was hard to find anything to critique in your piece. You use very good grammar ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: "Everybody Is A Suspect Here" Part 1
Hey Mucho! Shady here with your review. :D (a man whose name must be missing a vowel (or possibly two)) ~ I don't really like parenthetical statements at all-- and ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Sir Chivalrous
Hey Fort! As a Knight of the Green Room, the title "Sir Chivalrous" drew me in. ;) For the most part the pace was good. It was a bit choppy ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: To Gyani Maiyi Sen
Hey MaK! I don't read/review/write much poetry, but I adore science, so I thought I'd give this a shot. :D The rhythm was very nice in this piece-- it flowed ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Seven For A Secret - Part 1
Hey Scar! Shady here with a review for your piece. a branch high up in a/the tree Terrorify , even ~ Yeah, that's totally not a word, dude. I think ...
Feb 19, 2013 -
Re: Sea of Gray (Ch. 2)
Hey Cas! I'm finally back with your second review. :D It had ugly horses built like sighthounds with fur like gold, small horses with short backs and high-carried tails, and ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Wisdomatch - Chapter Three
Hey Kaz! Shady here with a (belated) review, as requested. :D long ago benumbed, ~ I, too, am not sure if that's a word. If only I can see him, ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: The Roads of Marceris Ch.8 (2/2)
Hey Dude! Shady back with review #2, as requested (and I beat Twit this time. Yesh. :P ). You must be thirsty yes? " Two for the price of one! ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: The Roads of Marceris Ch.8 (1/2)
Hey Dude! Shady here with your review, as requested. :D “I still can’t see anything because of this blasted mist. ~ I don't usually think of 'mist' and 'fog' as ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Elder - Chapter 1
Hey, it's my Mentee! Hi Mentee! :D Dakota told her. Relieved, Kianna thanked him, Dakota studied the her expression on her muzzle. "OK, if you're sure..." ~ This part should ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: Murch
I'm finally here with your (belated) review. And since Murch valued his intestines, he would stay well away. ~ Bahaha, very nice. xD flow of people wasn't quite so irresistible ...
Feb 15, 2013 -
Re: Nothing is ever certain
Hey Clarity! Shady here with your review, as requested. You are already aware that my poetry reviewing skills aren't impressive, so I'll skip right to the review... There is always ...
Feb 13, 2013
