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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Lives That Matter

    Heya galaxygem, Shady here with a review for your lovely poem! I generally go from specific comments to broad. Let's get started... Thrown out and bruised inside and out I ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 3.1)

    Scribs! I'm only on the 6th part of this, and I'm already out of openings! Let's get started... Rowan Rowan Rowan rowan rowanrowanrowan It was a goldfinch with feathers like ...

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.2)

    Scribs! I'm back and ready for more! Let's get started... “Because you’re the oldest,” Rowan muttered, and kicked a stone. “I’m only a few months younger.” AWWWW buddy

    Sep 14, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.1)

    Scribs! Guess who's back... back again... no? Okay, let's just get started... It had been a week since Mishal had been the target of one of Cassius’ pranks. Ember had ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.2)

    Scribs! Shady back, and excited to see where you're taking it in part two of the chapter. Let's get started... As small as the study made her feel, Margaretta always ...

    Sep 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.1)

    Scribs! I'm sorry that this took me so absurdly long to get to, but I'm here now! Let's get started... Mishal pretended to raise his chin, flare his nostrils, and ...

    Sep 11, 2020
  • Script » Horror, Film Re: From the Bench to the Beach

    Heya silverquill12, Shady here with a review for you this lovely RevMo! I do have to warn you that I am not well experienced in reviewing scripts, but I am ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Usted es un vaquero loco: Costa Rican Cowboy

    Heya BustedFlush, Shady here with a quick review for you this lovely RevMo! This was a short piece, but I enjoyed reading it! I'm very curious to know whether this ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Chickens, Humor Re: Rise of the Planet of the Chicks

    Heya Hkumar, Shady here with a review for you this lovely RevMo! Let's get started... where they were just featured in menus as- hot wings or spicy nuggets. No more ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Rage (Chapter 2)

    Heya MissGangamash, Shady back with another review, as promised! Let's get started... Ezra held his phone to his ear, feeling more and more panicked the longer the ringing continued. When ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Rage (Chapter 1)

    Hiya MissGangamash, Thanks so much for requesting a review over in my WRFF thread! I'm excited to read your story! Let's jump right in... He heard Becca heading up the ...

    Sep 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Between the Stones

    Heya IamI, Happy RevMo! Shady here with a review for you. Let's get started... Mary was still asleep when I woke the next morning... My thoughts became more fragmented as ...

    Sep 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Forgotten Ch. 2

    Heya Omni, Shady back again for another review this lovely evening on the last day of the first week of RevMo! I don't have specific feedback on this chapter, so ...

    Sep 8, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Forgotten Ch. 1

    Heya Omnaya! Here for the review, AT LAST! Let's get started... The large tent swayed against the buffering winds and sand, and sheltered the hardened men from the blistering sun ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Alpha Pack: The Dawn of the Dead, Chapter 2

    Heya Harry, Shady back again! I'm sorry it took so long to get through all of these chapters, things have gotten hectic with my life, but I am looking forward ...

    Sep 7, 2020


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